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ShadowDranzer
  Posted: Jan 27 2006, 10:37 PM


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=Here's my story enjoy it peoples=
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The story begins with a teen at the age of 13 his name is Raidon Yoko, he has a older brother named Daigin Yoko who took a trip to Kinyuri for 1 year to excavate a hidden ancient cave. After Daigin left ,Raidon left as well to go visit his best friend Nozomi Akako to China he knew everything about beyblades but thought Raidon knew about them until him and Raidon went out into the city . Nozomi was surprised that Raidon didn't know anything about because he always carried his bit beast around on his necklace and never even knew about it.Raidon discovered about bladen when Dozomi took him to see a great restaurant that he always liked to go to. It was until after they got out of the restaurant they saw a BBA blade shop and finally Raidon asked the big question he never knew "What is beyblade?" but Dozomi was so surprised that he had never heard of beyblades even when Raidon had a beyblade but Raidon never even knew because Daigin found it in the cave he was excavating. So with Raidon's very curious mine he went inside and to both of their surprise the person running the shop was the champ Tyson Granger who told him about the BBA tournaments around the world .Finally Raidon told Nomozi that he wanted his name to be known around the world as well so with his beyblade genius at his side he told Nozomi that after this week they would set off. So when the final day came for them to leave and set off on their action adventure they went on a high speed jet that Raidon's cousin pilots they said their good byes but before they left Nozomi's mother told him that if they needed some where to stay they could stay at his cousin's house. Finally they were off on their journey starting at the USA capital Washington DC.
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Dr who
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 04:28 AM


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This is quite good, keep them up!
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Joe, The Other Guy
Posted: May 4 2006, 05:40 PM


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It's pretty good but you should work on your author skills. =\
Good job tho.
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Dr who
Posted: May 18 2006, 12:41 PM


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When's the next one?
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