Character histories, Seems like a good idea to me . . .
Jamos
Posted: Jun 23 2005, 04:39 PM


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Here be the timelines for all my characters along with brief overviews of all their adventures and whatnot.

Ryoushi Tandokuno - Quincy

*Ryoushi Tandokuno Arrives
- Tando's first night in the city after leaving his old home in the country.
- He senses a hollow and confronts it on the roof of his apartments. To gauge
the strength of hollows and test his own ability he deliberately gives the hollow
openings to attack him in and regrets it as he gets more than he bargained
for. Now he sports scars on his arm and face to remind him not to be so
careless.
- Decided to finish old training and heads for the park.

~ XP earned - 25 ~

*Completing His Training
- Gets to the park and tries to finish what his old master started teaching him
about destruction magic. Doesn't manage much until he has a flashback which
causes him to get all worked up and he blows up a bunch of trees and exhausts
himself of spirit energy knocking himself out briefly, at the same time
advertising both his whereabouts and tastiness to all nearby hollows.
- Wakes up and runs about. Kills some hollows and then gets disarmed by one,
desperate he uses magic to kill it but is now in a bad way - critically injured and
spritually drained.
- Comes dangerously close to becoming hollow snack when a mysterious master
quincy whom he suspects he knows from somewhere shows up and wastes the
hollows about to eat him. Then this mystery man spirits him off to hospital for
treatment

~ XP earned - 85 ~

*The past and the present
- Wakes up after being asleep for 2 days straight. The mystery benefactor introduces himself as Kentetsu, a Quincy master and friend of his Uncles. They have a chat about Tando's past and why things turned out the way they did - enter startling revelations - and then Kentetsu offers to help him finish his training.

~ XP earned - 60 ~

Kentetsu's last favour
-Its two weeks after Tando was hospitalised by hollows. Kentetsu has arranged to meet him in his apartment from where they will finish Tando's training - the learning of destruction magic.
-The Quincy Master shows up late and then instructs Tando to practice for half an hour on his own while he does something to prepare.
-Eventually he instructs Tando he is ready and apon opening his eyes, Tando finds himself in the centre of a ring of runes drawn in blood. Kentetsu spills some of Tando's on the runes and then performs a spell that seems to transport them somewhere . . .
-Turns out to be some mystical place, a small pocket between worlds that can be controlled by the occupants subconscious spirit ... something like that
-Tando isn't happy to be back, Kentetsu leads him to a confrontation with his past demons. Tando gets a second chance to confront his brother Kazuma at the moment he attempts to gun down Tando's uncle Mitsurugi.
-Tando fights well against his brother but is easily bested in the end despite all the progress he has made. As you might expect he's pretty bummed out.
-Kentetsu explains that it is fate and cannot be changed. No matter how powerful he could of been, he still wouldn't have won.
-Realising that it actually helped him overcome his own demons, he feels ready to finish training. He has grown.
-So they train for four days and four nights -INSERT MONTAGE-
-Tando faces a brutal final test against some nasty assed rock golems and completes it along with his training. Kentetsu is pleased but says he must go on a horribly dangerous mission and won't see Tando for a long time - if at all.
-Tando goes home to his bed.

~ XP earned - 290 ~

The Lone Shinigami
-Tando is out for a walk, thinking things over and the like when he stumbles apon a battle between a man - Nanashi - wearing funny black clothes and something hiding itself in the shadows.
-He dives in to help out and gets stabbed in the hand for it.
-The hollow is mega-fast but not very bloodthirsty and Tando and the man who turns out to be a deathgod, try to fight it but are totally outclassed.
-A human girl, Wakaba, appears and Tando - who is having bother getting Nanashi to give up - asks for her help.
-All goes pearshaped and Wakaba gets a mighty stabbing, but the holow doesn't go for the kill. The shinigami healer Shinji turns up to help out the wounded and Nanashi and Tando have a run-in after the deathgod calls the quincy a coward.

~ XP earned - 80 ~

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Onikizui - Hollow

*The Birth
-The human mass murderer Nikuya is chased down by the police to a deserted warehouse in the old industry sector of town. They chase him into a building that has part of the void caused by the psi-bomb housed within it and then after a brief fight, shoot him from a rooftop with a sniper rifle, causing him to become a soul.
-So after that he dies obviously and along the way gets his chain of fate stuck in the void. Some mysterious force has a hold of it until it bursts into flame and starts burning away rapidly. Meanwhile a lone junior deathgod (godmodded by me) is wandering about the area.
-Que the big transformation. Theres an unusual hollow transformation that takes place, that seems to be being affected by some kind of energies from the void. After a while, a new hollow is made. It calls itself Onikizui and refers to itself as the son of demons.
-Fights death god
-Eats death god

~ XP earned - 130 (+20) ~

*Nightime Hollow Hunt
-Smells trouble and gatecrashes a fight between a powerful hollow and a whole bunch of people trying to take it down.
-After a brief spell of observing, Onikizui is curious to test his abilities and so apon spying an opportunity against the deathgod Nanashi - he dives in.
-At that point another deathgod - Reito - to help out Nanashi who wouldn't have been able to hold his own. They fight briefly and then MEGA Quincy Asgard arrives to ruin the fun.
-Onikizui decides that it is best to escape whilst he can and flees into the night.

~ XP earned - 75 ~
double-o-sloth
Posted: Sep 13 2009, 11:43 PM


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So far from what i read i like it. The story is cool and can be worked with, the way to aquire abilities seems worth while and the enviorment seems not all childish. go for broke i say!
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