Title: Printing & editing screw ups
JimmyAEMT-I - May 22, 2004 06:40 AM (GMT)
I finished TO the other day...and the last chapter...talking about who the wedding party was....Summer was refered to as "soon-to-be-sister-in-law"
I had to go back and reread it...
Anyone else notice any other weird little sayings
I know the Dirk Jr description brought up in another top
"Dirk trimmed the sail in his shorts"
Mostly Heep - May 28, 2004 05:14 PM (GMT)
I just found this one in Atlantis Found;
Page 237,when Dirk and Pat go to St.Paul Island they meet Al at the entrance to the cave
"Dr.O'Connell."Giordino bowed gallantly and kissed her gloved hand. "We needed someone like you to brighten up this dingy place.
Pitt smiled and curtsied."My pleasure sir"
Hmmmmm, may want to can the editor :lol:
DirkPitt - May 28, 2004 05:49 PM (GMT)
This by Dirk Pitt Jr. ... "But I'd give my right arm if Dad and Al were here."
Maybe it should be .... "But I'd give my right arm to have Dad and Al here."
(end of chapter 40 in Trojan Odyssey, p. 401)
Helene Noelle - June 5, 2004 05:56 PM (GMT)
"He [Pitt] had been seated in the coctail lounge in conversation with Admiral Sandecker's daughter..." Trojan Odyssey (Chapter 14, p. 138)
Oooops, Pitt was referring to Adrian, Admiral Hunter's daughter.
TroutFan - June 11, 2004 06:53 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Mostly Heep @ May 28 2004, 05:14 PM) |
I just found this one in Atlantis Found;
Page 237,when Dirk and Pat go to St.Paul Island they meet Al at the entrance to the cave
"Dr.O'Connell."Giordino bowed gallantly and kissed her gloved hand. "We needed someone like you to brighten up this dingy place.
Pitt smiled and curtsied."My pleasure sir"
Hmmmmm, may want to can the editor :lol: |
When Pitt replied, I think he was being sarcastic towards Giordino. :P
Mostly Heep - June 11, 2004 01:41 PM (GMT)
Actually I think it should read
"*Pat* smiled and curtsied".........
Mandasy123 - June 11, 2004 02:31 PM (GMT)
boissee - June 11, 2004 06:40 PM (GMT)
;) The editor needs to cut the golf games! :blink:
golferreino2002 - June 13, 2004 05:31 PM (GMT)
For how many books he's written that we love I think we can let the books go on a few slips wouldn't ya say? j:
