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| courtney | Posted on Jun 15 2006, 10:48 AM |
| Loved it Gamay. Look forward to the next story. I hope it's soon. |
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| Dagaz | Posted on Jun 14 2006, 06:35 PM |
| suitably final. die dog!!!!! |
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| dradvent | Posted on May 31 2006, 05:39 AM |
Great story can't wait for the next one |
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| oswalder | Posted on May 31 2006, 12:59 AM |
| Good job, Gamay! Not a lot of drama at the end, just "bam!" Haha. Can't wait for the next one! | |
| tonym5 | Posted on May 30 2006, 11:13 PM |
I assume Pitt shot Zolar, right? Woooohooooo Bring on the next story Gamay!!!! |
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| Dear_Heart05 | Posted on May 30 2006, 09:04 PM |
| YAY!!!! Great ending, Gamay! |
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| gamaytrout103 | Posted on May 30 2006, 06:54 PM |
| Zolar's eyes darted around the room, looking despertly for an escape route. He wasn't ready to deal with Pitt yet, and the look in Pitt's eyes frightened him. It was the look of a tiger closing in for the kill. "How did you know I was here?" "Two Secret Service agents fail to respond to calls. What am I supposed to think? Where are they by the way?" Pitt asked. "Take a guess," growled Zolar, trying to back out of the room. "Stop right there," Pitt ordered, getting angrier by the second. He felt dirty even talking to this scum. "So what now?" Zolar asked, his hand moved subtly toward his gun. "You die," Pitt said, his voice calm and even. "You first," cried Zolar, pulling his gun and aiming it at Pitt. Zolar never got a chance to pull the trigger. The bullet entered his body, causing him to bleed internally. He'd be dead within seconds. Pitt knelt by Zolar. "Justice has been served," Pitt hissed to Zolar as he died. When Pitt was sure Zolar was dead, he went to find his family. They were clustered together in a nearby home, surrounded by Secret Service agents. Loren was the first to see Pitt. She rushed forward to hold him. Pitt took his wife in his arms, kissing her passionately, and then he hugged his children. "It's over. It's all over now," he whispered to them. The nightmare was over and life moved forward. Giordino recovered quickly and returned to his old life without problems. The two agents who died were given beautiful funerals, and their families were well-taken care of by the government. Pitt reflected on the events of the past few days, and a wave of relief swept through him. "I really am a lucky man," he thought smiling. THE END |
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| tonym5 | Posted on May 30 2006, 04:29 AM |
Good bye, Zolar!!! |
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| Dear_Heart05 | Posted on May 30 2006, 04:20 AM |
| Thats what im talking about! |
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| gamaytrout103 | Posted on May 30 2006, 03:33 AM |
| Oh I don't know. When nothing is happening and actions are being repeated again and again, the mind tends to dull, particularly if you've been at it for a while. The guard had no reason to doubt the identity of the person returning. Pitt waited alone in the house. Zolar had made a drastic mistake. He had underestimated his opponent. The guards at the front of the house had stopped responding to calls, and Pitt was able to guess what Zolar was up to, so he had the Secret Service agents take Sandecker and his family to safety. He wanted to deal with Zolar alone, and wouldn't allow anyone else to be hurt. The door behind him creaked and Pitt spun around on his heel, gun at the ready. The shock on Zolar's face was obvious, and pleased Pitt immensely. He was finally in control again. "You!" Zolar cried, barely able to believe his own eyes. "Who else?" Pitt asked in mock innocence. "I think it is way past time we met face to face." |
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