Radiant, KakaSaku, drabble

[Kitten]

I don't know where this came from: All I remember is repeating the first three words of this over and over again in my head. I've been wanting to scribble down some KakaSaku for a long while now, and I'm happy with this. Even though it's a drabble and not even 200 words, I'm proud of it.

So, without further ado, I give you my first (KakaSaku) drabble:

Kakashi smiled wholeheartedly at the cutie that sat across from him; at the beautifully radiant little sucker that caught his eye, whose eyes shone with a glistening innocence of jaded emeralds and whose dazzling smile blinded even the wealthiest of jewelers who had seen their fair share of glittering diamonds.

Wordlessly, he held out his hand to her. Her smile only broadened, quite literally blinding him for a moment's second, and she slid the silky smooth material of a delicately cared for hand into his rougher and more experienced one. He would have tried and grasped some of that precious little health only a breadth's hair from his lips, the life force that he needed to survive – or, more specifically breathe, but he was much too taken by the fact that his most beloved little woman had not only taken his breath away, but his sight as well...

"Eh, Sensei," asked Sakura, her voice growing an octave as her pretty green eyes widened with concern at his groaning and stumbling form. "Are you alright?"

Now, if only she knew, gosh darn it!

[IceFarie]

I think it's sweet but the ending part was a bit weird....but I do really like! :D

[Kitten]

Thank you. :)

Yes, the ending is a little vague, isn't it?
It was supposed to be implied that he stumbled from lack of oxygen from Sakura's prettiness and dazzleyness, but she doesn't know because she's completely clueless of his feelings towards her.

x3 I love hidden devotions like KakaSaku.