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The Reality Reboot| Caracal |
Posted: Jul 23 2008, 10:21 PM
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Photokinetic  Group: Knights Posts: 308 Member No.: 12 Joined: 21-June 08  |
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| Blade |
Posted: Jul 23 2008, 10:23 PM
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Burning makes me squee~ Group: Knights Posts: 72 Member No.: 26 Joined: 2-July 08 |
Nice rain effects. :3 looking forward to the next comic dude.
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| Altair |
Posted: Jul 23 2008, 10:32 PM
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Member Group: Peasants Posts: 14 Member No.: 55 Joined: 23-July 08 |
First one in, and already it looks really interesting! Awesome work here, dude.
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| Dregan |
Posted: Jul 23 2008, 10:46 PM
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Advanced Member Group: Peasants Posts: 72 Member No.: 47 Joined: 17-July 08 |
Very interesting. I'll be curious to see where you're going with this one.
I like how you've got the little marks where the rain droplets are hitting Caracal, although they could've been a bit more subtle. |
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| Sevex |
Posted: Jul 24 2008, 05:48 AM
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The Forums Nobody Group: Peasants Posts: 151 Member No.: 44 Joined: 15-July 08 |
impressive, I'm curious on how its gonna turn out
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| Caracal |
Posted: Jul 24 2008, 09:00 AM
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Photokinetic Group: Knights Posts: 308 Member No.: 12 Joined: 21-June 08 |
Thanks everyone, though to be honest I'm not sure about the last three panels. I made them due to lack of fighting sprites but I may end up changing them to go back to what I originally intended. A friend also suggested I changed his facial expression.
Dregan - To be honest I wasn't sure how best to do them. Looking back, I agree they are a bit too big and thick and if I do re-make the comic, I'll look at shrinking them down a little. |
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| Drake |
Posted: Jul 24 2008, 11:59 AM
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Spirit of Dusk Group: Peasants Posts: 204 Member No.: 6 Joined: 21-June 08 |
Awesome like always Car ^^ I love your work.
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| King Squeak |
Posted: Jul 24 2008, 01:08 PM
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Administrator Group: Kings Posts: 342 Member No.: 1 Joined: 21-June 08 |
Well, none he less, it's great to see Yuno back.
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| Caracal |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 10:35 PM
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Photokinetic Group: Knights Posts: 308 Member No.: 12 Joined: 21-June 08 |
Re-made #1 as I wasn't to happy with where it was going. Plus I struggled to think up where to go next from there.
 First of all, yes I'm surprised that "Ferrokinesis" is the term one would use to describe someone who manipulates metal. A bit of further research on "Ferro" lead me to find out that it's the term used to describe some kinds of metal (and typically, I can't find the aritcle again... =_=;;; ). I wasn't sure whether to do bio cards now or later on. Blade suggested I threw them in now and because some readers may not be as familiar with some of my characters, it's a good way to introduce them. Used the earlier versions of the Blood Devil as I'm still re-designing them. |
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| King Squeak |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 10:55 PM
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Administrator Group: Kings Posts: 342 Member No.: 1 Joined: 21-June 08 |
Nice work on the new issue, and the remake.
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| poonipoonz |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 11:07 PM
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The Psychopath Group: Peasants Posts: 252 Member No.: 19 Joined: 24-June 08 |
I agree with Squeak.
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| Exerkol |
Posted: Jul 27 2008, 11:09 PM
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BEEN DERE DONE DAT GOT DA HAT! Group: Knights Posts: 170 Member No.: 23 Joined: 29-June 08 |
0_0 SHINY ORB...
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| WeBO |
Posted: Jul 28 2008, 07:18 AM
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Moderator Group: Knights Posts: 112 Member No.: 10 Joined: 21-June 08 |
Loving this comic so far
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| Caracal |
Posted: Jul 28 2008, 09:29 AM
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Photokinetic Group: Knights Posts: 308 Member No.: 12 Joined: 21-June 08 |
Thanks everyone.
However a friend pointed out that the Blood Devils don't really fit in as well with the other characters, so I may finish re-designing them and re-make those two panels after doing so. Alternatively I may change the dialogue a little to show those two in a more casual environment. Let me know which of those two ideas you prefer. |
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| Drake |
Posted: Jul 28 2008, 01:37 PM
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Spirit of Dusk Group: Peasants Posts: 204 Member No.: 6 Joined: 21-June 08 |
WOLF PUNCH ASS**** ! I agree with everyone abowe me plus I add pie !
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