"Its A Wonderful World", Comedy/Adventure Comic

Hey guys, So this is my new recently started comic, Hope you enjoy it.





Comic Rating: (®),
Contains strong Language, Mild Violence and Talks of a Sexual nature.


Chapter I - "Room Mates"

#001 - "Home Sweet Home"
#002 - "Homeless?"
#003 - "Mrs Sonic.....?"
#004 - "Number One Fan"
#005 - "New Found Love"
#006 - "Thinking Time"
#007 - "A Hard Lesson"
#008 - "Old Fashioned Trickery
#009 - "Constant Reminder"
#010 - "Music=Sexuality"
#011 - "Love Struck"
#012 - "Good Friend In Red"
#013 - "A New Home For Two"

Chapter II - "The Drug Lord"

#014 - "The Forest Provides All"
#015 - "Totally Screwed"
#016 - "Hard Thinking"
#017 - "All About The Rent"
#018 - "Speed Run"
#019 - "Hiding In The Shadows"
#020 - "The Good Old Times"
#021 - "A Special Interruption"
#022 - "The Messenger"
#023 - "Killing Him Softly?"
#024 - "Words Of Comfort"
#025 - "Filler: Falcon Punch!!"
#026 - "Happy Birthday To Me"
#027 - "Beauty Before Friends"
#028 - "Troubles In The Night"
#029 - "Heading Out"
#030 - "Insensitivity"
#031 - "The Golden Saucer"

Interesting concept. I only have one flaw, and this is really nit picking - text bubbles. Granted this may only apply to my current monitor, but I find the text near impossible to read for Sonic and your avatar. I've always lived by the mantra "light text on a dark background and dark text on a light background", and I feel their text should be white or their bubbles should be brighter.

Other than that nice work so far and I look forward to seeing how it develops.

Sonic's text really? Seems fine to me. I guess i can understand my characters, Anyways i'll play around with some of the colours and see what i can do.

Thanks for the crit and the comment

Like I said, it may just be my monitor, but it is always better to be safe than sorry. Perhaps make the colour for Sonic's bubbles a little brighter just to be on the safe side.

I agree with Caracal on this ^^ Anyway I also think that Amy`s hot ^^

It's a good comic, but the generic Amy tries to marry Sonic kinda turned me away from it. Also, like Car said the text bubbles need some work, you may also want to add tails.

Thanks for the comments guys, So far im up to #021. So from there i'll start working on some of the stuff you've said. I'll upload some more comic's later.

UPDATE: Six more comic's added to first post!!

Also the thing about Text bubble tails they seem to cross over alot of stuff which is why i dont like using them, Instead i perfure the colour text ones, But thanks for the advice anyways, I might make another comic sometime and practice using them better.

I like how you're slowly introducing the comics to all the new readers.

Yeah its the best way, This way people wont have to read a long list of comic's. I like saving peoples time

To be honest I personally hate it when spriters use "fuck" and "shit" in the comics. 1. it doesn't fit in with the kind of character Sonic and co represent and 2. I just don't see the need for it. A comic isn't good just becuase someone uses "Class A Swear Words". Crap and bastard are fine though (they're often used on TV shows).

Also the whole "Sonic is Gay" joke is has been done to death so much it's been reincarnated and killed again. I once saw someone on Sheezy flag it as one of the biggest flaws of Sonic inspired sprite comics and I'm afraid I have to agree. If it's a nod/passing comment to Psy then fine, but I wouldn't reccomend making it anything more.

You know you've said the exact comment about the "Sonic gay thing" has someone else when i post that comic up.

First of all, He is not gay. It was just comment.

Second i kinda agree with the swearing but i did post saying it would have strong swearing in it.

Thanks for the comment.

After reading those comcis I did re-read Squeak's comment and realised these would be old. Sorry.

Gay Thing - If it's just a passing comment then fair enough. However it is still an over used joke and I would suggest not using it again in the future.

Swearing - At the end of the day it is your comic, but I still feel it isn't appropriate or necessary in the Sonic universe.

Like everyone else said, the swearing is just a little odd. The fact that they say it more often like troublesome people makes them odd. But it's your comic, so you're pretty much free to do what you feel like

Anyway, I look to see what else you have in store for this comic series

Thanks guys, Yeah i think i will tone down the swearing abit, What can i say there young lol.

I'll upload more comic's later, Thanks for the comments.