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Qix
Posted: Jul 30 2008, 06:34 PM


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List any errors you find here. Thanks Qix.

First of all, I've noticed that the pronoun that you use to describe the group change. Sometimes it refers to the group in first person - something in third person. It's like the riddler is with the two travelers, but not really. I don't know if this is intentional, but it comes across rather strangely.

Second - the progression of riddles. I already told you this in a pm - but I feel that the riddle doesn't have a good difficulty curve. I think you should add some more easy riddles to start people off with.

Actual phase errors I will post when I find or pm you about them.

This post has been edited by FreudianComplex on Aug 2 2008, 07:14 AM
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FreudianComplex
Posted: Jul 30 2008, 07:41 PM


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Thanks.

I think I'll modify the second last riddle I've uploaded so far to something easier.

And it's not intentional. You're supposed to be the riddler travelling in a time and space unknown to mankind... oh well. Can you PM me where you have found these perspectives to be the wrong P.O.V.?
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Qix
Posted: Jul 30 2008, 07:50 PM


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For example from the introduction:
It took a whole night's worth of debate before they figure out where to go.

Since "you" are part of the group - shouldn't it be "we" instead of "they"? (oh and change figure to figured)
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FreudianComplex
Posted: Jul 30 2008, 08:14 PM


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woops hehe, i'll get right to that smile.gif
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testaccount1
Posted: Aug 3 2008, 06:49 PM


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Testing testing one two three.
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Qix
Posted: Aug 11 2008, 09:20 AM


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Don't you think the new image are a bit too large?
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