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List any errors you find here. Thanks Qix.
First of all, I've noticed that the pronoun that you use to describe the group change. Sometimes it refers to the group in first person - something in third person. It's like the riddler is with the two travelers, but not really. I don't know if this is intentional, but it comes across rather strangely.
Second - the progression of riddles. I already told you this in a pm - but I feel that the riddle doesn't have a good difficulty curve. I think you should add some more easy riddles to start people off with.
Actual phase errors I will post when I find or pm you about them.
This post has been edited by FreudianComplex on Aug 2 2008, 07:14 AM
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