A cantrip Unsummon that lets your opponent draw a card. Nobody will play any sort of Unsummon at Sorcery speed. It's not going to be broken or anything at Instant.
Bluetail Zvelt should say "2 or more cards" instead of "more than 1" (Magic wording...)
Endless Thoughts could even cost 1U.
Jar says "Remind" instead of "Reclaim".
Maybe only U to return Raven Curse to hand?
Assassin's Influence is powerful.
Cranium Takh...OMFG you made it EVEN BETTER?! Perhaps 1/2 or something, at most.
Recycle the Dead is a sleeper.
Estos Combust flavour text: "it's" should be "its"......
Kragnor: Should say "gains first strike" instead of "has first strike".
Lavaglide Estos could even cost 4R.
Onslaught of Boomers: Can't you at least give it a really big Reclaim cost? Just so it's even SLIGHTLY better than Blaze?
Rings of Fire: Shouldn't it be whenever a creature blocks
instead of attacks? That's more with the colour of red. And there's no need for the "and/or"...a creature can't attack and block during the same turn. Just need "or".
Stealthblade: The name seems lacking... Stealthblade sounds like some kind of descriptor. You need a noun too. Either Krilian Stealthblade or Stealthblade Assassin would work.
Stone Rain. Flavour text. Streetz, I gotta say, I never liked this flavour text at all
Vin, Boomer Adept. I absolutely love the idea. But I'd like to make it even more interesting! Something like this:
Vin, Boomer Adept 3R
Legendary Creature - Krilian Warrior
Vin, Boomer Adept comes into play with one +1/+1 counter.
R, Remove a +1/+1 counter from Vin, Boomer Adept: Vin, Boomer Adept deals 1 damage to target creature or player.
At end of turn, put X +1/+1 counters on Vin, Boomer Adept where X is the amount of damage Vin, Boomer Adept has dealt this turn.
He has the potential to become very big indeed, but it can be a challenge to do so.
Agar, Toch'Nar Scout: Bad experience with an Air Elemental while growing up? What's with the *5* damage?!
General note: Ambush wording: Whenever one or more creatures attacks you, if this card is in your hand, you may play it as an instant for it's Ambush cost. If you do, return it to your hand at end of combat.
Do you need to add if it's in play
somewhere in that last sentence?
Ptah's Whim: Flavour text is missing a 't' at the end of 'though', I think.
Thicket Estos: 'Gains trample' instead of 'has...'
Verdiestos: I imagine some sort of infinite combo with this one. Like with Phyrexian Altar + CITP thing like Pandemonium.
Also, you better get some judges to check the wording on the card.
Legendary Lands: I agree with Mad Mat that there should be an activation cost (of perhaps one of that coloured mana) on these lands. And change the ability on Valikh, Bexnor Stronghold.
Xiosis's Portal: Perhaps shuffling your hand into your library should be part of the cost? This post has been edited by Einsteinmonkey on Aug 4 2005, 04:02 PM