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 "Voices", Poetic Lizzeh returns!
Liz
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 09:30 PM


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Sorry, it's in IMG form, 'cause BB Code is annoying. D;

I wrote it just before spring break & found it in my Bible As/In Literature book. x3 Enjoy!
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Blaze
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 09:32 PM


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i like silent


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Liz
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 09:38 PM


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Thankies. :]
But do you have any suggestions?
I would like to know where I can improov.(Can't spell, either.)


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Blaze
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 09:44 PM


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poems are uneditable.


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Posted: Apr 9 2007, 09:55 PM


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Oooh, I likeit!


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Liz
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:01 PM


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Thankies Switch! n_n

And I guess you're right Niisan, poems come from the heart, not from the icky brain. xD


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Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:07 PM


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eewwww, brain. DX


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Blaze
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:08 PM


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unless you an anologuos freak!


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Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:12 PM


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yeh, deh bastahds.


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Blaze
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:13 PM


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the freaks!!!! *makes a cross of spikes*


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Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:14 PM


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MORR SPIKEZ! *throws more spikes at Blaze*

O_O O_<

*backs away slowly*


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Blaze
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:16 PM


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*catches spikes and throws them back at you twice as fast*


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Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:17 PM


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*dodge* HEY. D: You was supposed ta use thoooose.


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Blaze
Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:24 PM


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oh...*wills them back and makes an even bigger spike*


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Posted: Apr 9 2007, 10:26 PM


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YUS! Bigggg spikes! *hunches back and tweedles fingers* Mmmm, yeesssss yessss! eeehehehehe!


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