here's a few hints on your audition....
Looking at it, right away, there's a lot more information needed. You should look in the audition section of the rules, and follow those guidelines. There are a few more things you will need to include in your audition:
Out Of Character
Name: your name
Age: your age
Gender: your gender
Location: Please place a rough location of your whereabouts, i.e. UK, USA
Name: name of your wolf- first and last
Age: age of your wolf in summers i.e. 3 summers, 2 summers- wolves cannot breed until after 3 summers, and this year's pups now are about 10 months of age
Gender: gender of your wolf.
Sire: (Enter your wolfs' father's name.)
Dam: (Enter your wolfs' mother's name.)
Siblings: (Enter any siblings your wolf has.)
Mate: (Only list if they are a current member at NB.)
Pups: (List your wolf's pups.)
Appearance: (Enter your wolf's description. What do they look like? Do they have big paws? Big ears? You decide, just remember to be descriptive and detailed. This is your chance to make your wolf unique. Don't go and choose a 'beautiful white wolf with bright blue eyes', as this can be looked down upon as unoriginal and despie-ish. Aim for about 2 paragraphs, although 1 will be accepted if it is long and detailed.)
Personality: (Like appearance, the personality your wolf has is what makes them unique. Don't just put 'Evil', as evil can come in many forms. Explain how they fit into being evil; are they grumpy, disliked, violent, etc. If so, /why/ are they disliked? Why are they violent? There is so much you can write about to describe your wolf's personality, so aim for around 2 paragraphs.
History: (Your wolf's history is a very big part of this audition. It describes what has happened in their life before they came to Northern Boundaries and helps us get a general idea of your character. Describe the events and make it as interesting as possible, such as, what happened when they were born? Who was in their pack? How did the pack treat them? Why did s/he leave? Try and make your story as original as possible, although remember, it doesn't have to be depressing to be interesting. We expect about 3 paragraphs on this.
Roleplay Example: (Please, on separate lines, link at least 3 examples of your role-playing skills. This is so we can see how you role-play in a group, rather than one post.
Then post a roleplay example written for Northern Boundaries)
Also, this site is moving. Please come here http://www.northernb.com
to audition. This is the new site. Enter, then go to "forums" at the top of the screen. There, you should read the rules, then audition there. Hope this helps!
(Torcian- I saw this new audition and decided that since I was on, I might as well tell her this myself. If there's anything else you want to add, go ahead. I just wanted to do this now, so that she can audition at the new NB sooner. Maybe we shuld make a thread saying not to audition here anymore, in case people miss the whole "NB is moving" thing. Hope this helps!)