Hi everybody.

I have written a Dramione called Escaping Heartbreak under the name Athenarena. I am in desperate need for someone to tell me what is wrong with it. I am losing readers faster than I can click and I need to know what I need to do to improve it.

Thank you,

Athenarena

Why don't you post in on here? We'd be more than happy to help.

Good idea. Thanks, I will just go do that.