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Djhatstar2007's Torchwood Mess, Let out the pain at the bad writing| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 12:41 AM
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-------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
 
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| MackenzieW |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 01:03 AM
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Was there a point to that story? Good sporking, but nonsensical story. Is Susan going to start a Society for the Protection of Capital Letters (SPCL?) like Quatre did for the neglected commas?
-------------------- You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot
"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "Out on the Mira on soft summer nights Bonfires blaze to the children's delight They dance round the flames singing songs with their friends I wish I was with them again And over the ashes the stories are told Of witches and werewolves and Oak Island gold The stars on the river they sparkle and spin I wish I was with them again Can you imagine a piece of the universe More fit for princes and kings? I'll give you ten of your cities For Marion Bridge and the pleasure it brings"--Song for the Mira by John McDermott, performed by Celtic Thunder "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! |
 
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 01:18 AM
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I do believe she just wanted to write something about Janto (Jack/Ianto) and didn't think about a proper plot to it or anything. There's another chapter to this, of a story with more of plot but still as OOC. At least I think you meant the story I MSTed, you may have meant my story before and after the MST.
I think Susan might, I'm going to have to stop her lighting candles soon or else the theatre is going to burn down. -------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| MackenzieW |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 01:29 AM
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I meant the story you MST-ed.
-------------------- You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot
"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "Out on the Mira on soft summer nights Bonfires blaze to the children's delight They dance round the flames singing songs with their friends I wish I was with them again And over the ashes the stories are told Of witches and werewolves and Oak Island gold The stars on the river they sparkle and spin I wish I was with them again Can you imagine a piece of the universe More fit for princes and kings? I'll give you ten of your cities For Marion Bridge and the pleasure it brings"--Song for the Mira by John McDermott, performed by Celtic Thunder "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 01:32 AM
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I guessed so. I just remembered my 'Protection Of Animals In Sue's Society' that was started after all of Anegy's animals. I need to add that to my signature.
-------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 03:25 AM
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Lol, great MST mate.
 Hmm..I should probably add those to my sig too... -------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 02:05 PM
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Yep, I think Susan will start the 'Society for the Protection of Capital Letters' in the next chapter, that memorial is becoming quiet a safety hazard. Keep your eyes peeled for the onext chapter.
-------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| Fishpaste |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 04:07 PM
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*blinks* That was...weired. What was with the text speak?
-------------------- Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke!
Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) |
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| jules14 |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 05:29 PM
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This is much better than your last MST, including your grammar and spelling. Great job.
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 19 2008, 09:30 PM
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Thanks. I'm improving with stories, plus this one was easier to MST. That text speak was really annoying. The next ones even worse, Ianto's mom is using text speak too. -------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| Mathonwy |
Posted: Aug 20 2008, 12:51 AM
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Thanks for that! I actually liked the fall into textspeak at the end, as it made all the errors in grammar and spelling more excusable. And I loved that Torchwood now has a jacks office. What do they do there? Car repair, bowling, illicit gambling?
Looking forward to hearing more of this "Qwen" too. Sounds like a promising newcomer! -------------------- "From the moment I picked up your book until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it."
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 20 2008, 01:41 PM
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I can just see Ianto walking in and shaking his head at the mess being made my there illict gambling group. And Qwen, yes I'm sure she would be intresting, if I hear of her again I'll let you know. -------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| MackenzieW |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 04:56 AM
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Ooh, Gwen had some mishap with an alien device and created a clone named Qwen. They have nothing else do with her, down two people (sniff), so she joins the team!
Honestly, I'd rather have that than Martha. -------------------- You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot
"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "Out on the Mira on soft summer nights Bonfires blaze to the children's delight They dance round the flames singing songs with their friends I wish I was with them again And over the ashes the stories are told Of witches and werewolves and Oak Island gold The stars on the river they sparkle and spin I wish I was with them again Can you imagine a piece of the universe More fit for princes and kings? I'll give you ten of your cities For Marion Bridge and the pleasure it brings"--Song for the Mira by John McDermott, performed by Celtic Thunder "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! |
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| Mathonwy |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 01:24 PM
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Clearly there was some terrible transdimensional mix-up, and she's merged with Q from Star Trek TNG. Or possibly Q from the Bond movies. Either way, I want to hear more about this character! -------------------- "From the moment I picked up your book until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it."
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 01:44 PM
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Hmmm...I don't think Qwen showed up in the second one, sadly. We could always search the Torchwood fanfiction archives and could quite possibly find more.
Hey, what would you call a mini of a misspelled Torchwood character? -------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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