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The author's name is telling enough...
Could she be a Bleach fan?

And if name wasn't telling enough, the summary leaves no doubt.

I hate defending a Sue, but that's not disrupting. It's not like she is talking or doing something that draws attention of others. Heck, saying nothing is better than saying a smartass answer which will cause the rest of students to laugh and stop concentrating on the subject.

Again, this should have been taken to psychologist. She draws same picture constantly and refuses to communicate with people.
I know logic is not to be expected in Suefic, but abuse and the way schools neglect students with psychological problems is not something to be taken lightly.

Or, again, sent her to psychologist. Her behaviour smacks of autism.

And why didn't anyone else notice this?

And, unfortunately, beyond this author's writing capabilities. It would have been interesting.

Uh-oh.

Good pick! I'm somewhat familiar with DW, but this fic is so bad, one doesn't have to be familiar with original to get what's wrong.

I'm torn between looking forward to and fearing next chapter...

I'm sorry, but I'll always think of the Witch-King as Tim. Of course, you'd have to contact Ari to get her permission to use it...

You have a stray comma there.

Actually, it's the Society for the Protection of Abused and Neglected Commas, but we'll take whatever we can get. Right, Quatre?
Quatre: Right!

Er, too late. It appears it already is a habit.

No one in the school noticed this? Look, Suethor, this might surprise you, but school officials are actually trained to spot abuse. I'm not sure about the UK, but in the US, they are required by law to report any suspected abuse. Something like that would've qualified.

Especially as it is clear Dad's abusive.

Of course she was.

Good start, Ulti.