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Djhatstar2007's Torchwood Mess, Let out the pain at the bad writing| jules14 |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 03:57 PM
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 (Wo)man on a Mission  Group: Members Posts: 1.161 Member No.: 5 Joined: 11-July 08  |
I'm wondering if that whole fic is just an excuse for the author to type in chatspeak. I mean, it has no plot, and if you took out the texting, it would be barely one page long. Also, am I the only one who thought of a duck pulling up pondweed when it said "he grabbed his tongue with his mouth"? Bad, bad wording.
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| Fishpaste |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 06:35 PM
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 Rising Again  Group: Members Posts: 2.875 Member No.: 10 Joined: 12-July 08 |
Lol!
I'm not convinced this isn't a troll, it seems too dumb not to be... -------------------- Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke!
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 07:25 PM
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Haha yes, a good anaology. I thought the wording for that bits was ridiculase. -------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 07:25 PM
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A weevil? -------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 07:36 PM
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 Chasing Shadows  Group: Members Posts: 14.541 Member No.: 4 Joined: 11-July 08 |
AHH!! WEEVILS!!! *hides*
-------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 07:39 PM
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King of Nothing Group: Members Posts: 6.155 Member No.: 12 Joined: 26-July 08 |
Hmm that would make sense though, I mean it's mini Balrog's in LotR. Oh and I found someone called Ianot out there too.
-------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 07:40 PM
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oh Lord, how hard is it to actually look up how a name is spelt? Good gravy.
-------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 07:42 PM
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King of Nothing Group: Members Posts: 6.155 Member No.: 12 Joined: 26-July 08 |
The thing was, the author spelt it right throughout the rest of the story, it was a typo, but it shows they don't proof-read their stories.
-------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 07:57 PM
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Chasing Shadows Group: Members Posts: 14.541 Member No.: 4 Joined: 11-July 08 |
Yeah, you gotta have people look over your stuff. BETA readers are your friends...
 -------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 08:37 PM
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King of Nothing Group: Members Posts: 6.155 Member No.: 12 Joined: 26-July 08 |
Like you Aria *hug*.
-------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 09:07 PM
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aww! *hugs back* Thanks! Warm and fuzzy moment!
-------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 09:55 PM
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King of Nothing Group: Members Posts: 6.155 Member No.: 12 Joined: 26-July 08 |
Thanks, though, for being my Beta.
-------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 10:01 PM
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Chasing Shadows Group: Members Posts: 14.541 Member No.: 4 Joined: 11-July 08 |
oh it's no problem at all mate! You gotta poke me sometimes, as I tend to forget that it's there, but other then that...
-------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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| Siany-T |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 10:03 PM
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King of Nothing Group: Members Posts: 6.155 Member No.: 12 Joined: 26-July 08 |
I don't mind poking you, lol.
Oh and I like the idea of 'everytime a Torchwood name is spelt wrong, a weevil grows it fangs'. -------------------- Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! |
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| AraionaDuBois |
Posted: Aug 21 2008, 10:10 PM
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Lol, I'm pudgy so you might get sucked in when you poke me.
 Hey, that sounds pretty good! Nice one Siany!! -------------------- Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.
Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. |
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