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UltimateEvilLord1
Posted: Dec 12 2011, 07:17 PM


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Read the...thing...here.


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Amarth
Posted: Dec 13 2011, 08:29 AM


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Strawberry-ChappyForever

The author's name is telling enough...
Could she be a Bleach fan?

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Summary: A Sue who draws blue phone boxes over her schoolwork with an abusive father happens to stumble upon 10 and Rose and the TARDIS, and it all goes off from there.

wallbash.gif And if name wasn't telling enough, the summary leaves no doubt.

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"If she's asked a question, she won't answer, too busy drawing-well, this!"

I hate defending a Sue, but that's not disrupting. It's not like she is talking or doing something that draws attention of others. Heck, saying nothing is better than saying a smartass answer which will cause the rest of students to laugh and stop concentrating on the subject.

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"I apologize, sir. She hasn't been quite the same since her mother died. I'm not sure where she got the box from. I don't know if she created it, or if she saw it somewhere, but I will make her stop."
Barnes nodded and Andrew left the office.

Again, this should have been taken to psychologist. She draws same picture constantly and refuses to communicate with people.
I know logic is not to be expected in Suefic, but abuse and the way schools neglect students with psychological problems is not something to be taken lightly.

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Vader: Did he have to launch into that? He couldfve just had a talk with her and sorted out her doodling issue.

Or, again, sent her to psychologist. Her behaviour smacks of autism.

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"Just settling a problem. It's none of your business. Get lost."

And why didn't anyone else notice this?

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Davros: Hmcnow, if they catch him, that could lead to the Doctor becoming some sort of lawyer for child abuse, or whatever the earth term is. Now that would be interesting.

And, unfortunately, beyond this author's writing capabilities. It would have been interesting.

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But when Rose looked at the girl again, the glow was brighter this time, and orange. It looked almost exactly like when Rose had seen the Doctor regenerating...

Uh-oh. ninja.gif

Good pick! I'm somewhat familiar with DW, but this fic is so bad, one doesn't have to be familiar with original to get what's wrong.

I'm torn between looking forward to and fearing next chapter...


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MackenzieW
Posted: Dec 15 2011, 10:10 AM


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The Witch-King of Angmar, AKA Bob, Lord of the Nazgl,


I'm sorry, but I'll always think of the Witch-King as Tim. Of course, you'd have to contact Ari to get her permission to use it...

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Davros: That should be Weeping, Angel


You have a stray comma there.

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*holds up Society for Neglected Commas jar*


Actually, it's the Society for the Protection of Abused and Neglected Commas, but we'll take whatever we can get. Right, Quatre?
Quatre: Right!

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"Mr. Barnes, I assure you, I will make sure this doesn't become a habit."


Er, too late. It appears it already is a habit.

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He pulled Claudia up from her chair by the shirt and held on all the way to the car.


No one in the school noticed this? Look, Suethor, this might surprise you, but school officials are actually trained to spot abuse. I'm not sure about the UK, but in the US, they are required by law to report any suspected abuse. Something like that would've qualified.

Especially as it is clear Dad's abusive.

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The girl was glowing.


Of course she was.

Good start, Ulti.


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When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
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I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


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You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
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A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
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