Go With The Flow

[Heart.Breaker]

Hi, My name is Anne. I'm 16 years old. I love to write and I write different things. I wouldn't call myself a beginner but I'm not an expert that much, though I'm slightly more then in the middle... I'm not perfect. Flaws are what I have but I'm good... Sorry for sounding soooo over confident but I know my own level. I've been told and critiqued a lot and even though I hate to be critiqued, if it's put nicely then I can take it easily without being rude... But whatever I say after, I always consider the comments...

I write lyrics & poems, stories & Fanfictions but I never finish them. Which leaves me with over 30 stories started and plots and ideas but none of those stories have been finished... By the time I want to continue one, I get ideas for another one... Imagination flows through me like water in the province of Quebec. (Let me tell you there's A LOT!!)...

I hope you like what I do!!

ps: The ones who made the Banner for my second story is M.A. (Mary Ann), I only gave her the pics... She's such a sweetheart...

♫Anne.♫

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The Graal, Object of Desire (UPDATED: 2 new chaps!!!)
This is the story of an ex-thief who find herself obeing a man of power to save her fiancé. Yet meanwhile, an F.B.I Agent on vacation seeks for action and adventure like the work-o-alic that she is... Will they meet? Will our ex-thief be alone to accomplish her quest to save her fiancé? Read it to see!
The Graal, Object of Desire

The Daughter

This is the story of a girl who's Dad was killed in a "car accident". Was he really? Karen has to now move with her mother who's rich and at the top of a special team. She is an embassador and so she is rich and Karen hates the idea of being in a castle.
The Daughter

My Guardian
I wrote this after me and my boyfriend broke up. I was walking home and I was inspired. I found myself saying it out loud to get it inside my head. When I got home I wrote it down. Reviews have said it "has beauty in the words".You tell me if it's true
My Guardian

[!Alyciabaleesha!]

You have amazing writing posted. I think, even aside from what's posted, the potential of your stories is unfathomable ... you possess creativity, originality and a clear focus, and I honestly can't wait to read more of your writing and work with you on whatever projects you decide to post

You have been placed in the group Crazy Caterpillars.

This graphic is for you (and putting it in your sig is completely optional!! )


Your group will change as your writing changes, and is in no way concrete. Congratulations on the group placement!!

Alycia

[Heart.Breaker]

YAY!!!! Thank you love!! I apreciate it!!! I'll post something new as soon as I can!!

Thanks again dearest!!

Anne.

[Heart.Breaker]

Juliette's Adventure
This is the story of aiglr with a lot of imagination and a small world of her own. She's not délusionnal but see the way she sees the world with er four friends and protectors. Whenever she has no control over the situation or needs someone to talk to, "they" are right there with her. The never leave her side, litterally.
Juliette's Adventure


......:::::: À la Vie, À la Mort ::::::......
This is a french story. It's the story of two people who can change and influance the balance between good and evil. Here's the story plot in french:

C'est l'histoire d'une jeune femme de 19 ans, Émiliane Lune, qui se retrouve mèlé dans une histoire de sang et de peur. Vampires, Démons, Anges et Dieux sont en combat pour une cause importante dont pourrais changer le monde entier mais qui gagneras? Tout cela doit être décidé par la demi-déesse qui est toujours porté disparu. Seul un de ses déscendants peut décidé qui des deux côté gagneras en se rangeant sur le côté qui lui est le plus atrayant. Les deux côtés ont donc envoyé des équipes pour retrouvé la déesse ou n’importe qui ayant dans ses veines, le sang de cet ancêtre.

De plus, une troisième équipe, neutre, est en jeu et veux aussi retrouvé ceux qui pourront influencer la guerre pour une raison personnel. D’un autre côté, un jeune homme dont la vie n’est qu’aventure, se retrouvera lui aussi mèlé à cette histoire sans avoir été consulté avant. Il serat enthousiaste mais pour combien de temps?

Contrairement à ce que le Bien et le Mal croient, il y a une autre jeune personne qui peut leurs venir en aide mais ils ne l'aprenderont qu'au moment du combat finale; le dernier combat entre les deux.
À la Vie, à la Mort

iPods, Projects & Amour
This yet another french story. This ones is about a different thing. I'm working on re-writing the prologue chapter because it has been said confusing. But I think I actually meant it to be... Anyhow, I'm working on it.

I'm not giving you the sotyr but the context in what I started to write it. It started of as only one chapter but some people told me they wanted to se more but I had set my mind. But one time I got more ideas for it and decided to make it a whole story!
iPods, Projects & Amour

[Sibylla's Omen]

Hey I just read The Daughter and first of all: it has wonderful potential. You portrayed the MFC's emotions very well and consistently throughout the entire chapter, which is key to making her seem real. That's another thing, I almost immediately connected with her and cared what happened to her. However you've also got a few technical revisions that need to be made.

For one, the tense changes sometimes; as is exemplefied in this paragraph:

...my brown hair fell ungracefully on my shoulders, the bottom was curled slightly. As I looked at myself in the mirror, the image of my dad flashed in my head.

Whereas the story is in the present tense.
Then there are some grammar and punctuation errors, but that's fixed easily with a beta reader, or by re-reading it out loud.

All in all though, if you proof-read it a couple more times I think that it would flow more smoothly and capture the reader's attention quicker.

I'd happily be your beta reader! PM if you'd like

[Heart.Breaker]

Thank you! You must be the first and only one to have read that story recently, exept maybe the one who first read me before I put in this group!

I will have another look at it, thank you for lettin me know, I hadn't realised I was doing that! hehe...

I will most likely send you a pm in a few minutes now.

Thank you for you're comment it's nice to know this story does that! I'm working hard with school and trying to type de next chapter of all my stories but it's not all that easy.