' ' holy smokes, batman!, 9.21.08

[Ripley]

Hello there =] Ripley here with my various sturf. Enjoy -i hope-! <3


Roleplay Posts
most of my writing samples are from roleplaying, i haven't been able to give a lot to full out stories lately.

just a stranger }} - twilight rpg. my writing is for charity sharde. most recent postings.
gossip girl pt.2 - gossip girl posting. always fun.

Stories
--various stories i've been working on

' ' Sir and Lady - coming soon
' ' Cimmerian - coming soon

Random Writings
--random things..

Broken Pottery* - Inspired by a prompt ['broken pottery'] I found on an online prompt site.
My Yesterday* - Just a random thing I wrote up. Kind of based on current frustrations in my life.

Atlantis
--'Atlantis' is a story I have been working on for yeeears. It started with a dream I had about characters you don't even meet in any chapters I have completed... sad, I know. Work in progress, so lots of drafts and character development projects, etc. Be gentle, the original stuff was written when I was like, thirteen. I'm revamping a lot of it, sooo, yeah =]

' ' Draft 1
--draft. not my best work, but it's where everything started.

' ' Chapter 1
--chapter 1. again, it's still a work in progress.

' ' Chapter 2

' ' Chapter 3

Work In Progress.
please be gentle <3
sadly, this isn't my best
but it's the best i have on my computer.
will try to update soon.

* = New

[lalaland]

I really like your ideas and characters thus far seem to be well rounded and non-mary-sue-ish (which is killer in stories). The thing I have to comment on is your words can get quite repetitious and you have awkward sentence starts. A good plot gets a reader interested but bland sentences can bore them to death. Try adding more spunk to them and you can make even a bland story sound like an epic adventure. I really like your piece "Broken Pottery". Hope to see more (pieces of literature, I mean xD). :]

[Ripley]

Well thank you =] This makes me feel very good seeing as "Broken Pottery" was written spontaneously not even an hour ago, the other pieces are RPG samples [which always lack pizazz in my opinion], and the others were last updated almost a year ago =D So thank you very much. I'm going to try and type up some other pieces I have in my poor tattered notebooks and to update the Atlantis stories, but again, those are slow at work.

<3

[Asterope]

You have been placed in the group Eggchild. .


This graphic is yours to keep, and you can put it in your sig if you'd like ^^ Your group placement is in no way fixed and will change as your writing changes. I'm more than sure with a little bit more practice you'll move through the ranks in no time.

With all of that said, congratulations on the group placement!! I hope you enjoy the forum as much as we enjoy having you here.

[Ripley]

Coolness =] Better than nothing I guess lol.
Note: New random writing added. It's very bleh, but hey.
<3

[Railenthe Y. Zeal]

I've just finished reading Broken Pottery.

I wasn't sure where it was going, but then when I got to the last lines, it hit me like *wham!* I enjoyed reading it, even though it managed to put me into an angsty mood.

There weren't too many style issues; they were mostly minor and didn't distract me frmo the reading itself. (I'll point them out if you want me to do so. =] ) All in all, I am enjoying your style. You've got a knack for the shock!ending. I like that.