First off, I'd like to point you in the direction of the Armies of the Warhammer 40,000 Universe. It's the background for part of the universe in which Warhammer exists. If you are replying to a story, and you're about to mention an event that occurs within the story, please put a line similar to '***SPOILER***' at the very top of your post.

Thank you everyone! And remember, constructive criticism is good. Destructive or pointless criticism is forbidden! One more thing, don't get discouraged if people don't reply or comment on your story. You should only ever stop writing if you don't want to write any more. Even if no one says anything, there's still probably people reading your story. Also, some people only have time to read the fan fic every couple of weeks. Keep that in mind