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Dominique	Posted: Sep 30 2007, 12:16 PM
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bionic61	Posted: Sep 30 2007, 05:34 PM
OSI Trainee Group: Members Posts: 27 Member No.: 29 Joined: 27-August 07	Great Start Dom You have my interest I'm anxious to reread this. Can't really rmemeber how it played out. Holly AKA Goldman74 BVSMDM board

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Posted: Sep 30 2007, 10:33 PM

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QUOTE (Dominique @ Sep 30 2007, 05:16 PM)

This is a story that I wrote a while back for the BVSMDM Storyboard. I decided to start posting it here for those of you who don't get over there too much. I haven't written any stories with Jaime in them (yet) so all of my older stories that I'll be posting here, (if you all don't mind) will be centered around Steve.

Don't sweat it.

Fanfic stories doesn't have to be strictly crossovers.

Strictly SMDM stories (without Jaime) are always welcomed as well as strictly BW (without Steve).

Hell, anyone is welcomed to post BW 2007 fanfics stories if they want to (although I won't be reading them).

I'm looking forward to reading your story tomarrow.

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Tigerlily	Posted: Sep 30 2007, 11:44 PM
Bionic Operative Group: Members Posts: 212 Member No.: 17 Joined: 7-July 07	Interesting story told with great detail Dominique.

Agent X	Posted: Oct 10 2007, 11:28 PM
Bionic Operative Group: Members Posts: 450 Member No.: 4 Joined: 28-April 07	It's off to a great start and read like a professionally written novel. BTW was that Agent Mark Russell that Steve was asking to do a phone trace. I�m not too sure if he had ever appeared on any SMDM episodes. -------------------- MySpace Steve: I�m a big boy now. Oscar: Then why don�t you start acting like one ?

messyhead	Posted: Oct 11 2007, 09:27 PM
Bionic Operative Group: Members Posts: 202 Member No.: 14 Joined: 14-June 07	Hey Dominique - I really liked this. It's well written and concise. I only have one complaint - aren't all hostages by nature reluctant? Except for Patti Hearst, maybe?

Dominique	Posted: Oct 20 2007, 03:19 AM
OSI Trainee Group: Members Posts: 26 Member No.: 5 Joined: 28-April 07	Hello Agent, actually the Mark in this story was an O.C. (original character) that I came up with. I'm not familiar with Mark Russell. You do have a point Messyhead, but based on the Stokholm Hostage theory, where some hostages eventually become loyal to their captors, the hostage in this story never develops that loyalty. Good point though.

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Posted: Oct 22 2007, 01:27 PM

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QUOTE (Dominique @ Oct 20 2007, 08:19 AM)

Hello Agent, actually the Mark in this story was an O.C. (original character) that I came up with. I'm not familiar with Mark Russell.

There's a character on The Bionic Woman series named Mark (Russ) Russel. Like Callahan, he was in alot of episodes.

He was more or less Oscar's right hand man and Jaime Oscar and Rudy always called him Russ for short.

I just don't recall if he had ever appeared in any SMDM episodes.

However when I read the first chapter of your story, I naturally assumed that Steve was conversing with good ole Russ.

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