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| Psyche |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 12:43 AM
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AIFO Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 14 Joined: 10-July 08 |
![]() A different wall-e fanchar XD lol Her Name is AIFO-A, Areodynamic Information collector Angel class. AIFO was a robot made by the Japanese some few years ago before all the humans left for ther "5 year cruise" XD her Job was to to be a spy of some sorts to collect info on whereabouts of criminals (Japan had a huge problem with crime as well as trash and pollution) she can cloak herself to make her undetectable and is a small agile robot as well, plus she's extremely fast when she flies. She's a stubborn girl who is determined to do her job right without failure, but is also quickly develops a personality being a mix of Wall-e and EVE's along with her own traits of her desire for everything to be organized so she can easily find things(which is why she's frustrated with the whole of New York City being a total dumb just starting to look greener and getting cleaned lol) AIFO Angel class means she works for the police force, however they're is also a 'devil class' meaning some spy bots like her are made for the criminal master minds as well to beat the officials at their own game. many of these, devil class AIFO models that were made illegaly were the cause of the other angel class AIFO's to be severely damaged enough to be obsolete on thier missions. AIFO model 203 here is the last known prefectly functioning AIFO bot. AIFO is awaken from being shut down for 700 years by Wall-e in some abandoned building, immediately she flies off to continue her Directive. However, she runs into M-O just as Wall-e did to EVE, and the special love story repeats itself, this time with M-O being the lovesick one. (awww! I smell cuteness!) XD AIFO is © Me M-O is © Disney/Pixar |
| Slushy-man |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 02:17 AM
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Factory New Group: Members Posts: 49 Member No.: 6 Joined: 8-July 08 |
Shes vary nice! ^^
You shouldent have given her a skirt tho! >>; It temps Meeeee! X3;;; |
| Psyche |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 02:33 AM
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AIFO Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 14 Joined: 10-July 08 |
don't blame me... she made the skirt herself... she claims she felt nakid XD *dies*
AIVO: well I WAS!! |
| Slushy-man |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 02:37 AM
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Factory New Group: Members Posts: 49 Member No.: 6 Joined: 8-July 08 |
He he he! XDDD;;; |
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| Pookeh |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 11:40 AM
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Rogue Robot Group: Members Posts: 105 Member No.: 2 Joined: 8-July 08 |
ROFL you should've written her name in Kana.
Those silly japanese. Cool idea, though. <3 |
| Psyche |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 12:09 PM
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AIFO Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 14 Joined: 10-July 08 |
lol yeah, litteraly, the Japanese are the current GODS of animation and technology. XD *dies* In fact, despite me having a knack for anime as well as american stuff, I personally think it's BECAUSE of anime that disney is going "downhill" think about it, it's overly popular to the point where it can be considered overrated with good reason. so if kids are watching anime now, what is disney to do? simply put, they try to target a comepletely different audience with High School Musical and Hanna Montanna. (I like hanna montanna better XD *dies* ) |
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| Tora Yakari |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 03:57 PM
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The Cake is a Lie Group: Admin Posts: 103 Member No.: 1 Joined: 7-July 08 |
... Not bad.
The design is pretty cute and I do admit the story is fairly interesting. So yeah, nice job. |
| Pookeh |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 04:29 PM
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Rogue Robot Group: Members Posts: 105 Member No.: 2 Joined: 8-July 08 |
Well, I kinda lost my hope for liking anything Japanese after reading the Cloverfield manga. |
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| Psyche |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 09:00 PM
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AIFO Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 14 Joined: 10-July 08 |
oh yeah, I forgot about the exceptions of SEGA and few others... XD
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| Psyche |
Posted: Jul 26 2008, 09:02 PM
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AIFO Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 14 Joined: 10-July 08 |
really? my story is that good? ; and I thought I was bad at writting! XDthanks! |
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| Tora Yakari |
Posted: Jul 28 2008, 03:37 AM
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The Cake is a Lie Group: Admin Posts: 103 Member No.: 1 Joined: 7-July 08 |
Ah, okay I got a few suggestions!
I was talking to a couple of people about the existing WALL-E OCs and I mentioned AIFO. They said she looked REALLY cutesy, in kind of bad way; in that she didn't really fit in. They also said it doesn't really make sense why she needs clothes either. Not that I necessarily completely agree, I do somewhat agree in the fact AIFO is a little cutesy. Only thing I can REALLY advise to fix that is... ummm... maybe make the wings more hidden? XD Maybe AIFO doesn't have them activated all the time? Or just modify the wings a bit, make them mechanical angel wings instead of holographic. Or both, make them mechanical and give them the ability to like fold into her back or something. As for clothes... umm... no idea if that's even changable. XD Probably not. So I just say work on the wings. ^^; OH! And maybe lose the purple gem in the chest. It seems a little excessive. |
| Psyche |
Posted: Jul 29 2008, 02:21 AM
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AIFO Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 14 Joined: 10-July 08 |
fixed her! ^^ the gem will not make many appearances and I tried to make more mechanical wings ^^; but I think I'll keep them holographic and just have them hidden most of the time, the grey part is what emits the hologram and can fold back mechanicly, and she can get to places by floating or "gliding" across the ground in mid air like she's wearing roller blades XD
AIFO chart 2 |
| Tora Yakari |
Posted: Jul 29 2008, 02:36 AM
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The Cake is a Lie Group: Admin Posts: 103 Member No.: 1 Joined: 7-July 08 |
I like it! The new design looks really great, much more fitting and less flashy. ![]() Good work! |
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| Psyche |
Posted: Jul 29 2008, 02:47 AM
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AIFO Group: Members Posts: 78 Member No.: 14 Joined: 10-July 08 |
yeah, she still has the gem too but might not wear it often XD
the hologram is still the same only the metal emission will fold back into her like I said, and to explain her dress, She claims that her design makes her look like a nakid human girl and dosn't feel comfturable in her original bare look, she says EVE is lucky to have her design not be so arousing XD |
| Omegatower |
Posted: Jul 31 2008, 08:44 AM
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Ahrehk'taur Group: Members Posts: 19 Member No.: 13 Joined: 9-July 08 |
I like this character. It's a refreshing design and I absolutely love how you did the wings and face.
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