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World Descrption, the villages| Aruka |
Posted: Dec 23 2004, 10:34 AM
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The Village of Ankoku -this village is known for it long history of pillage and crime, most of it’s citizens are mere civilians, only that the place is infested with crime and poverty because of the different crime organizations that has been tainting the town of it’s true nature. The village is old and ran down; a lot of the buildings were torn down, some are even being rented as a shelter for the people of Ankoku. Unlike any ordinary village, Ankoku is very peculiar. Instead of streets that have been populated by people who are shopping, its streets are more of like a threat to the citizens. No one actually comes to the Village, but the that's the first village, I'm still working on the other one. Pls. post your comments at the other thread, thank you. |
    
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| sharinggan |
Posted: Dec 23 2004, 04:13 PM
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isnt ankoku supposed to be the good village? the one where the story starts off? cuz that village is supposed to be a nice, somewhat peaceful village. i supposed gedatsu( the evil village i think) could be infested with crime and stuff.. woulnt make sense tho, cuz they would be pretty organized if theyre sending the four evil spirit keepers to hitike(the neighboring village to ankoku) and trashing it and taking babies and kill ppl. well, n e ways, i think u should change the description for ankoku
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| DeathScythe |
Posted: Dec 23 2004, 06:56 PM
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yea i tihnk aruka must have gotten them mixed up
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| Shikamaru_09 |
Posted: Dec 23 2004, 07:36 PM
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I like the description. It would suit the other village better though. But I can really picture it well.
 -------------------- I Shall Bring Peace....
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| Aruka |
Posted: Dec 23 2004, 09:27 PM
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ooppps, I didn't know that Ankoku is the good village... Deathschyte gave me the names of the village and I didn't know that there were already somekind of plot for the village.
gomenasai! |
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| DeathScythe |
Posted: Dec 23 2004, 09:30 PM
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yea blame it on me why don't you
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| Philfoula |
Posted: Jan 7 2005, 10:02 AM
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The ideas are good, but I think you're putting too much crime and poverty. Or maybe not...
Keep up the good work! -------------------- -Philfoula-
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| santosj |
Posted: Jan 7 2005, 10:43 AM
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Crime and homeless are always good motivators for evil but needs a good context to be effective in a story. I don't think I can pull that off but perhaps Rodney can. I'm more on the death and destruction side of story writing. If there is pain and suffering, I will be there.
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