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They're both pretty cool. I particularly like Spade. However I must note there is a huge issue of lightsource with that image, in that, it doesn't really seem to have much of one, with the exception of a few small places, such as his hand. The face, despite said issue isn't blemished much by it and still looks quite good - Though the hair is a bit bland. The gun too, is fine.
Its the coat that suffers the most. The shading on the coat seems random, unorganized and sort of like a 'last-minute' touch-up. The dominant coat color there should be darkened and a brighter shade should've been added in, in order to accentuate where the light-source would be hitting, or to accentuate the wrinkles. Alongside this, the chest pocket seems to be just 'disapear'.
There is of course also the issue of the awkward round elbow and the gritted teeth with a cigarette. There are also a lot more skin shades then there are hair and coat, which is awkward as the coat/hair palette is much more dominant and present as opposed to the few patches of skin. It is, however, still good and an improvement. I'd simply work on those issues for your next drawings.
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The robot one is nice. There should be a few small shades in between the black and white for the shine, or perhaps blurred a little more. The kid on him however, his proportions are a little off (particularly, look at the left leg), the shorts are done terrible and he is too small and blurry to really be able to make out much of anything.
Otherwise, I can definitely see the improvements in your art. Just work on making it more consistent.
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everybody with his pain...
...and he, with his umbrella.
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Hey I got drawings, AWESOME
