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 Goodbye, Poem or song?
CandyGirl
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 02:55 PM


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Why did I believe those lies,
Those things you said were true.
I can't believe I'm saying this, but
I guess, I still miss you.

Even though you left me,
Hanging around, all alone,
I suppose I should just say it,
I keep waiting by the phone.

I want you to call, and say that,
You wish I were there.
You moved along, long ago,
And now you don't care.

You don't care about the way I feel,
You left me far behind.
We don't see each other any more,
But you're still in my mind.

Why can't I stop thinking about you?
Like you stopped thinking about me?
I know this won't happen, but
Why can't I be free?

Free of all these worries,
Free of all this pain?
I just want to forget you,
And feel normal again.

I feel like life's forever,
The pain will never stop.
I know that you are gone now,
But I can't stop the tear drops.

I just want to kill myself,
Why can't I just die?
The agony is stronger,
I just want to say,
Goodbye.
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nonamerhere
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 02:56 PM


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Uhm, at least the rhyme stayed consistent. Good.
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CandyGirl
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 02:59 PM


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I'm not a very good poet or anything, but considering I suck at ryming, I think it's pretty good.
Plus, it's a true story.
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nonamerhere
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 03:00 PM


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Okay. I don't like serious lyric/poem.
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CandyGirl
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 03:03 PM


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you actually thought i was serious!? HILARIOUS! I'm not a loser FSC! God i was joking about the "true story thing" god! you thought i was serious? *doubles over in laughter*
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nonamerhere
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 03:05 PM


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Ehh, go ahead. Lol. But I don't like serious ones.
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CandyGirl
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 03:08 PM


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than why did you read it eh? huh.gif
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nonamerhere
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 03:10 PM


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Wrong spelling to you. I read it because.... I'm bored. There's nothing else to do in this house. blehhh
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CandyGirl
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 03:12 PM


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i know how you feel, soooo crazily bored you revert to a FORUM for interesting stuff. anyway gotta go to a swim meet now byeas!
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snowcap4940
Posted: Jul 11 2007, 08:57 PM


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It's...weird. Gosh, how come every song/poem I read is so depressing?!
It's also good. But then again, I say that to almost every song on this forum. Whatever
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CandyGirl
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 01:56 PM


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Let's just say, I'm a lot better at ryming depressing stuff than funny stuff. I mean you can ryme pain with a lot of stuff. Rain, sane, train, plain, plane, main, mane... you get my point. It's just easier. Plus, whenever I try to make a song happy or funny, it always is terrible, here I'll try:

God I can't even think of anything, I've been sitting at this computer for 5 whole minutes trying! I'll get back to you on the matter Icy.

In the mean time... another depressing poem! yay! sorry... they're the only thing I can think of.

And I can't double post, so anyway...

Prison

Why am I behind these bars?
Why aren't you inside?
You're the only who killed them,
And simply ran off to hide.

You're the one responsible,
For the all blood and gore.
Inside this place, I've nothing to do
Everthing's a bore.

But that not what's disappointing.
That's not what's on my mind.
The fact you left those corpses there,
For only me to find.

I tried to tell them it wasn't me,
They didn't listen at all.
The jury called me "guilty,"
And that was my final downfall.

I thought I didn't have to worry,
I was innocent all the same.
I thought that you would help me,
But, you only brought me shame.

You didn't own up your mistake,
You failed to be a friend.
I should have known all along,
This friendship would never mend.

Now they're going to pay me back,
For something I never did.
Please now, come and help me,
Stop being a little kid.
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nonamerhere
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 02:18 PM


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... okay....
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CandyGirl
Posted: Jul 12 2007, 02:21 PM


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yeah, depressing is sooo much easier to ryme dude
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supersonicboom
Posted: Jul 30 2007, 07:25 PM


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I DON'T GET IT huh.gif
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