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Title: Wilkinson, Erin
Description: Bionic


Erin Wilkinson - December 30, 2010 06:45 PM (GMT)
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BASIC INFORMATION

CANON OR ORIGINAL: Original
AFFILIATION: Student

FULL NAME: Elizabeth Sheila Wilkinson
CODENAME: Bionic
NICKNAMES: Erin, Shelly

CURRENT AGE: 17
DATE OF BIRTH: 19 September
MARITAL STATUS: Single
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Heterosexual
BASE OF OPERATIONS: Xavier Institute
REGISTERED WITH SHIELD: Yes
TIME AT INSTITUTE: One year
HOMETOWN: New York
KNOWN RELATIVES: Mary Ann Wilkinson (Mother), Albert Melvin Wilkinson (Father), Christopher Alex Wilkinson (Brother), Susan Victoria Wilkinson (Aunt) Andrew Steve Wilkinson (Uncle),

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE

HEIGHT: 6ft
BUILD: Erin has a fairly average build for some her age.
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Blonde, Long flowing to the shoulders/Ponytail
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Slight hint of gold colour around the edges of left eye
CLOTHING STYLE: Erin is a typical teenager that used to wear the latest fashions for girls her age. This can range from many garments and clothes from shirts, short or long, to jeans and skirts short or long, jumpers to sweatshirts etc, but after her physical mutation she now tends to wear clothing that hides the truth from the outside world. All the time she wears a single glove over her left hand to cover up the cybernetic golden coloured hand. But apart from that she still goes for her favourite clothes including a full-length trench coat given to her by her father.

UNIFORM: Standard black bodysuit with the yellow X in the middle

POWERS

GENERAL DESCRIPTION: Erin’s codename speaks for itself literally. Her codename Bionic means that her mutants powers are of a physical nature, her entire left hand, fingers, left arm, both legs and feet and finally her left eye have undergone a transformation into silver cybernetics. The cybernetics are made of a organic titanium but unlike something from star wars the arms and legs aren’t just made out of thin metals and wires, it has a metal casing which protects the wires. In other words this casing acts like the skin and the wires etc are what’s underneath the skin. Inside her body are some wires which are connected from the left eye to the brain and from the legs to her heart, a wires built themselves a small computer which is stitched itself into her chest.

In all Erin has cybernetic strength in her left arm/hand and both her legs and feet. The strength allows her to easily flip a car or bus or even to punch threw a brick wall or door. It can also lift people that are heavier then she is, her hand could easily crush a cricket ball or even bend a weapon. The strength level in her cybernetic arm and legs varies, her cybernetic arm can only lift up to about one thousand pounds but can have a superhuman vice grip. While her legs can easily leg press of up to twelve tons. The cybernetic arm reaches from her fingers and goes right up to her shoulders, while her cybernetic legs reaches from her toes up to her waist.

The microcomputer in her chest allows Erin to run faster at the speed of sound or at the high speed of two hundred and eighty nine miles per hour, thus making her able to run faster then any other normal human being. Her strength in her legs allows her to jump higher then any normal person and could easily jump as far as to the heigh to a roof top of a house, possibly further with more training. Finally the wires around her brain allows her to fire a small but short laser burst which could penetrate titanium with little effort, the strength of the beam is controlled by her left hand, the greater the tight grip the stronger the beam would be.

WEAKNESS: Although her cybernetic abilities are amazing there is some weaknesses. The first is fairly obvious as she is human after all so she can be killed by projectile weapons like bullets and arrows, and can be knocked out by knockout gas, sleeping gas or a simple tranquilliser, the second is her bionics themselves. A mutant with metal manipulation like Magneto can easily stop her in her tracks, also her right arm and face are normal standard human organs so they can be targeted and broken quite easily.

PERSONALITY Before her X Gene was awakened Erin was just a teenager who enjoyed life to the fullest. She enjoyed the company of friends and was a person who kept her true feelings to herself and tends to just wonder into her own world in deep thoughts, she loved her family very much but tends to be a rather stubborn girl. Often she would argue with her brother and sister but deep down they loved and respected each other. She shared a special bond with her mother but didn’t spend much time with her father due to his work, sometimes Erin would hate her father since he choose his work over his family. So she didn’t really have a father/daughter relationship. Other times she can be polite but other times she is as quiet as a lamb while say reading a book or listening to music.

However this all changed when her mutation appeared. Now she is afraid of the world around her, meaning she finds it hard to trust people and is afraid of what people might think of her powers and her physical mutations. She tries her very best to hide the truth from the outside world but again keeps her emotions locked up tight, the only people she does trust are her own family and hasn’t seen her friends for days on end. All in all she just a frightened teenager who is frightened by her new looks.

When comes to the love/hate relationship between humans and mutants Erin find herself standing in the middle. She hasn’t really chosen a side at all but deep down Erin finds that this relationship is just saddening to watch. Although she doesn’t choose a side Erin believes that no matter what that person can do they all shared a common goal and that is that we all share the same air, and the same planet we live on. However her feelings towards her mutation hasn’t really changed at all, all though parts of her body was now cybernetic Erin feels scared of what people might think of a young girl having cybernetic limbs. She is scared that she would be bullied and hated just like any other mutants whose powers suddenly awakened. Hence her need to wear garments that would cover her cybernetics up at least until she could master them and get used them, of course during her time at the Institute She has gradually began to gain more confidence within having her abilities.

HISTORY


DURING APOCALYPSE: In 2009 While NY was hit badly by the rising seawater and hurricanes Erin stayed by her family and helped them to evacuate to the shelters. There she remained with her family until the defeat of Apocalypse at the hands of Mutantkind; afterwards she helped her family until the day things changed a year and half later. Erin was born in New York City to a family with a wealthy background. Well her father is wealthy while her mother and her siblings lived with enough money to last a lifetime. But they were just an ordinary family that lived in a house without any butlers and servants to tend to their every need. Albert who was the father of Erin worked as the wealthy businessman who ran a company that produced products like computers, laptops and programs to make a computer better. Mary Ann was merely a housewife who looked after the kids while their father worked, some nights he came home while other nights he simply stayed in the office. The parents of Erin didn’t really get along well and eventually ended in a divorce.

When she was old enough and after Apocalypse was defeated Erin went to high school for about six month and did well in her grades. But was constantly bullied for being someone who simply kept to herself, she didn’t fight back against the bullies and simply just ignored them while she made some friends of her own. Everything was going just fine even after the divorce of her parents, but her life soon changed forever, one day Erin felt a slight itching sensation in her left arm but soon ignored it. But as the days went by the itching became worse and she began to rub cream on her arm to stop the itching, however things went from itching to a much worse scenario. One morning Erin woke up as normal but as she showered she noticed that her arm had a single golden spot right in the middle of the left arm, she simply thought it was her brother or sister who was simply playing a joke on her.

But it wasn’t that case as she woke up once again on a beautiful day. But as she looked at herself in the mirror she gasped in pure horror as her entire arm was literally changed into a golden coloured arm, as she looked at a flap opened by itself and she saw wires running across her arm. Erin was petrified but she kept it a secret from her sibling and her parents, she tried with all her might to stay as positive as possible but no matter what she did Erin was not prepared for what happened next. Her legs began to itch as well but this time she felt an intense pain sensation in her stomach, the pain was so great she was crying out in pain and eventually slipped into unconsciousness.

Several days passed and Erin finally woke up in the hospital with several doctors looking at her as though they had seen a ghost. Beside her was her mother and her brother and sister, they too was in shock, soon Erin’s eyes turned towards her legs and noticed that they too were just like her left arm and hand. The doctors told Erin and her family that there were several shadows across her body, which were shaped like a snake. And was eventually told that she was a mutant. Scared at the thought of what everyone thought of her Erin jumped out her bed and began to escape the hospital shortly after her family was talking to the doctor in another room. As Erin ran she began to experience a tingling sensation in her stomach and ran faster then she could ever go but she ran outside of the hospital while wearing the traditional hospital gown and eventually ran into the city and into an alleyway

Crying out in utter terror Erin simply stood in the darkened alleyway and clenched her left hand tightly. As she did a laser shot out of her left eye and made a small hole threw a brick wall; she gasped in utter amazement. But just as she was about to run away again she bumped into her father who was eventually told what happened by her brother. Albert was in shock also but didn’t know what to say to her frightened daughter, but for the first time in nearly seventeen years Albert took off his trench coat and placed it around Erin’s shoulders. A day later Albert and Mary Ann worked together for their daughter’s sake, Albert made some calls and eventually called the Xavier Institute for help. Erin was enrolled in the school to help her learn how to control her cybernetic abilities and hoped that Professor Xavier was the very man that could help her understand her abilities. With goodbyes to her siblings and her parents Erin now wearing her father’s trench coat took a taxi and headed towards the mansion.

There she spent about a year at the mansion but spent that year being as quiet as a mouse as she slowly began to learn how to control her cybernetics. She didn't make any new friends and always kept to herself, but Erin was very loyal and always attended classes, now she continues her journey as the mutant known as Bionic.



POST-APOCALYPSE Bionic remained at the Xavier Institute and went on to take part in many classes and studied hard. There were several occasions where she took part in several tests just to see what her cybernetic mutation could do. However during her time at the Institute Erin slowly came out of her shell and began to interact with others, still she kept her emotions to herself though. However it was not long before SHIELD took interest in Erin because of her abilities, they were worried that someone might take Erin and copy her cybernetics for future plans. After much thought and support from the teachers at the Institute Bionic registered with SHIELD and now to this very day continues her studying and mastery of her cybernetics.

SAMPLE RP POST: A smokescreen of darkness began to form itself within the heart of the Heavens as it slowly dominated the sky like a curtain slowly being drawn over a window. Tiny dot like stars began to appear within the surrounding but eerie emptiness of the night like blue and white fireflies standing still while revealing their ever-calming light. However the light of the sparkling stars was not the only ones that penetrated the darkness, down below to the realm of man New York city below refused to die within the gentle slumber of the night. Lights lit up the city like a giant Christmas tree, dozens and dozens of fireflies either moved left or right, up or down. However these fireflies were merely the lights of cars as they drove towards their destinations, street lights helped guide the cars like a tour guide as it went from stop, to go.

A single car drove forwards threw the heavy traffic of central New York City. The car was pure yellow and had a single sign on the side of the car, which said “Taxi”. Slowly its tears screeched across the road as it headed towards its destination, inside was a man who was in his late twenties as he kept an eye on the road. While sitting in the backseat was Erin as she quietly looked at the passing scenery as it drifted past the car. Slowly she turned her gaze towards her gloved hand, she sighed a little and slowly she lifted her left arm and slowly opened and closed left hand. She felt really nervous at first but hoped that Professor Xavier or someone with knowledge of electronics can help her determine how she can control her abilities, she could feel that her left hand and arm felt just like any other arm and hand.

While still wearing her father’s trench coat Erin slowly adjusted her cool shades and slowly sighed once again. The shades were there to make sure no one saw the hint of a golden colour over her left eye, but again it looked like any other human eye except there was a yellow border going around it. Finally the taxi soon arrived at the address given to her by her parents and slowly the taxi parked in front of the mansion. It seemed fairly bigger then she thought but slowly she took off the safety belt and slowly opened the passenger side door with her right hand and stepped out into the open. The length of the trench coat easily draped down around her, as Erin slowly stood before the mansion for the first time in her young life. But she soon turned her attention to the taxi driver and slowly dug deep into the trench coat pockets and pulled out some change for the taxi man who happily took the money and drove off.

But Erin totally forgot that her luggage was inside so once again she began to run towards the driving taxi. With her trench coat flapping behind as she ran her tummy began to produce a slight tingling feeling and in mere seconds her legs soon activated and she speed off at high speeds, as she ran she called out “TAXI!” The taxi driver put the brakes on and saw the girl running toward her at normal running speed, soon Erin slowly went over to the driver seat and pointed towards the boot. The driver happily smiled and soon opened the boot for her and watched as Erin took out several bags and luggage, and once again the taxi drove off while Erin slowly carried her luggage and headed towards the mansion to face her destiny.


OOC: I must first apologise to everyone who involved in a thread woth me. My computer had a virus and deleted my URL links including this one, plus I had forgotten the name of the site, but I am now back and use my Aunt's computer to do posts until I am able to get a brand new computer.

Cyclops - December 30, 2010 07:53 PM (GMT)
the only part of the app I think needs some clarification is the apocalypse part. It would be very unlikely for her to be able to get into the city, via taxi during War's initial attack and the aftermath. That whole time line is off.

April 7th, 2009 early morning, War (Havok) attacked Mutant Town, and his converts moved up into the city, as well as down the east coast towards Washington DC. He surrendered that evening after almost killing Polaris, but his troops took longer to defeat. On April 12th, Apocalypse activated the Eye of Horus, which disturbed the core of the earth, causing earthquakes, hurricanes, volcanos, whatnot. NY was hit hard by Hurricanes and rising seawater.

that also happened in 2009, so if Erin was in the school at that point, she would have been at the school for about a year and a half now, so that needs changed in your info.

Also, this isn't on the app because it only applies to players at the school (for the most part though there were global affects) In 2010, members of the school, including Cyclops, were replaced by counterparts from another dimension that is very different from ours. Here is the plot summary. Erin does not have to have been aware of this, since the WwX characters pretended to be their XMR versions for their duration at the school, but Cyke and Iceman, for example were criminals in the other world, so the students might have noticed something.

Other than that, I don't see any major edits needed.

Erin Wilkinson - December 30, 2010 08:22 PM (GMT)
Hello Cyclops thank you very much for looking at my application. I did some changes like you asked and I hope they are ok. If not please do tell me and I will be happy to make some more changes.

Cyclops - December 30, 2010 08:48 PM (GMT)
I am still a little confused if she was at the school before or after Apocalypse.

Erin Wilkinson - December 30, 2010 10:53 PM (GMT)
I apologise for the confusion Cyclops. She went to school after Apocalypse buts it's her first time coming to the Xavier school. I would re edit it right away but I live in the UK and it's 10:50pm at night so I promise to adjust the post so that her history says she went to school after Apocalypse in the morning UK time. Until then I apologise.

Erin Wilkinson - December 31, 2010 10:03 AM (GMT)
Good morning Cyclops, everyone :) I have now made a tiny adjustment to her history. Inidicating that she went to school for six months after Apocalypse was defeated and stayed at the Xavier school for a year.

Quicksilver - December 31, 2010 10:14 AM (GMT)
I am good on this now. Keep in mind another mod might request changes I did not. You need one more stamp

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Buford Hollis - January 1, 2011 09:42 PM (GMT)
Works for me.
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Volt - July 30, 2011 09:13 AM (GMT)
This is a previously accepted character, see the note edited into the bio. I gave permission to attempt to pick up this character again as a student, despite the OC student ban because of mitigating circumstances.

Mystique - July 31, 2011 09:05 PM (GMT)
Welcome back, John. Thank you for your renewed interest.

There is an interesting idea here but some issues need addressed before I restamp you.

The powers need elaborated on beyond just how much of her has gone cybernetic. What all materials can her eyebeam pierce? How much can she lift? How high can she leap/fast can she run with those. Are her cyborg-limbs a known metal or some sort of biometal like Colossus or what? How much punishment can that substance take? Please elaborate on those questions.

I'd like to see a bit more fleshing out in the personality in general. How does she see the conflict between mutants and humans? Does she think she's a bad person because of her mutation? Just elaborate a little more.

Most of the problems surface in the History. You have references to Apocalypse before Apocalypse happened. Basically you added the new During and Post Apocalypse sections without splitting up the original history, so it's become confusing. Make sure to move the things that happened to her during and after Apocalypse from the original history segment into the During and Post Apocalypse sections.

Also, please note that with the exeption of the appearance of a false Xavier between the end of Apocalypse and the end of the WWX plot, Xavier's been missing since 2005, and also, the school is relatively secretive, so please reflect that in how she made it to the School and her tenure there.

Please take all of this into account and edit accordingly. If you need any help, feel free to PM myself or another member of staff. It's what we are here for.

Erin Wilkinson - August 3, 2011 01:19 PM (GMT)
Ok I did what I could for her powers section and added another paragraph to her personality. History wise I am still confused but I did what I thought was right, but again if its wrong please tell me and I will do it again.

Marrow - August 7, 2011 04:54 PM (GMT)
Alright, powers look good now except for the superspeed. The speed of sound is something like 770 miles an hour, give or take. You mention her running that or at 289 mph. Which is is it? IF it's the speed of sound, you need to limit it more, as it's not fair to pure speedsters on this site. For instance, Surge can move at superhuman speeds, but because it's a byproduct of her main power (as is the case here with Bionic) she will never touch the speeds reached by Quicksilver or Speed.

Basically, go to the smaller number.


As far as the history goes, you've fixed what I asked but you've also gotten rid of everything the happened before Apocalypse. We need you to have History Pre-Apocalypse as well, from childhood to April of 2009. Please add it back in under the section makred "HISTORY" above the "DURING APOCALYPSE" section.

Hepzibah - August 17, 2011 05:13 PM (GMT)
Is this Application still being worked on? If so, please post here or notify staff by no later than August 24th, or it will be moved to denied.

Cyclops - August 25, 2011 08:03 AM (GMT)
denied due to inactivity




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