Fan Fiction: Mahora Wars, Episode I: The First Impact

I have finish a few chapters in my language but it's hard to translate
to English. This fiction is not intend to implicate anyone. It just a
chaotic fiction I wrote with my madness.

The Tyrannas is one of the Predator-like species. so in the poster I
simply copy and paste from the Pretator Movie.

It is to be informed that in this episode, someone, maybe more than
one, tend to died in the end. She is to be an important (key)
character. So don't blame me. I'll resurrect her in the next episode.

For the translation is difficult and I rather don't have time, don't
request for the next chapter. I will dig and post in this topic when I
finished a chapter.

Thank you for being patient reading my first fiction.


Anna Hawkins










Darth Dragoon, a terrestrial of Tyranas system
lost through a gateway to Mahora Territory
while the Magicians, founder of Mahora, had built the district.
It came alone and dwelled in the huge cavity beneath the Island library
and discovered the great power rooted in this great academy.
The power that could make him rule Galaxy.

Long time did he lived underground, unable to contact his motherworld
because of disturbance of the earth magnetic field called the Belt of Van Allen.
Waiting until the Solar wind weakened this belt, he sent message to summon his fellows.
He tempted them to gather a huge army to invade and usurp this estimable power.

The Senate of the Tyranas didn't totaly believe what Dragoon claimed
but gather some army to the territory of Mahora.
While Dragoon waiting for the arrival, with the knowledge
dwell in the huge library beneath,
he disclosed the way to take use of the magic power.
Fear crept slowly to the Mahora Academy while the students didn't know
what they will encounter.



Prologue


The suspend bridge of Mahora, a large bridge that was only way to
the Mahora Territory, now no people, silent like a grave, run along
the vast area of black water in the calmly of the night.

A green light flame illuminated on the top of the tower of the bridge.
It's look like the Elmo's Flame on the top of the ship masts. That light
turned brighter enought to summoned the principal, Takahata Sensei,
Negi Sensei, Evangeline, and Chachamaru to be here in the midnight.

"Master, scanning detectd neither the source of the light and nor a
signal of magic power." Said Chachamaru while she lower her flight
from the tower to the road.

"Umm" Eva thought hard. It seems in this world there is no stuff to
bother this vampire, except Asuna at all, but this signal made her in
moody. "Thank you."

Negi came down his wand after a few turn of flying around the bridge
and.. "Found nothing, sir" Said Negi.

"Chacha is still not have an idea. Nor you can, kid." Said quarrelsome
Eva.

Takahata and the principal said nothing but signs of worries were in
their faces. Suddenly the green light become glair and so bright that
the whole bridge turn green. Simultanously several ball of blue flames
appeared in the night sky. And the ground accept the arrival with
igniting green everywhere. It seems the light on the ground fly to the
same destination, the Library Island.

And then the total area suddenly blacked out.

To be continued…

I like it, but shouldn't this have been posted in the fanfic section???

Sorry, misposted.
Could someone move it ^^'

So far pretty good. I like the poster too.

Whoo! Anna! Nice to see you back!

DOODS! Sweet poster! Story too (is good!)!

WOW! Really cool! I'm impressed and nice to see you back! ough-ough!

relly good and nice poster

Anna hawking is back or did you become a lurker ?


10/3/2005 edit: I guess she is a lurker since she hasn´t replied to my post

This post has been edited by erizo on Oct 3 2005, 08:00 AM

It's awesome!

the pic is cool the story is cool

can't wait for the next part...

yeah well ... keep wating anna was here just a moment ago but I don't think she remembers this thread, should some contact her and tell her she has fans.

she's here. i pmed her a bit, and she helped me locate some kotaro sigs for my kota sig