Welcome To My Life

[Ashley]

There are times in life that may be tough; some moments that may be a bitch. There are even moments where you just wish you didn't exist - you wanted to run away to an island. That was me sometimes - though now I know not to run. I fought through all those moments, found those that cared and here I am today. My demons are still strong; they still hurt deep down. Sometimes they can make me cry and remember the moments all over again - but I continue on. I know in myself that what I have here is what I need and what I should just stick with. So when you feel like you're drowning, no where to run to, just hold on 'cause it'll get better. Welcome to my life afterall!!!

[Chrissy]

Awesome job as I love how you wrote that, bud. I just love how you're so honest and came out with it forward and didn't hold anything back. It shows your true emotion.

[Lil Tigre]

Thanks Chrissy!

[Jr Princess]

Not really impressed with this one as the way you chose to write it just isn't working for me. The idea of doing it in diary format is a good idea though it seems as if you kept repeating your thoughts over to me. Keep on trying as hard work will eventually pay off but remember to work hard on expressing and try to stay away from repetition.

[Chrissy]

Keep repeating thoughts? Please explain that remark as I don't see it myself personally. All I see here is expression which is needed for good stories.