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Short Story| Nessa |
Posted: Jan 5 2008, 06:21 PM
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 A rabid Zuko fangirl^^ Group: Drones Posts: 2,070 Member No.: 73 Joined: 18-June 06  |
I wrote a story based on a dream I had, and I would really appreciate it if a few people read it, I need to know what to improve on. It's not totally finished, but it's almost done. I have one more section of it to post. Click to read.
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| Me, Myself, and I |
Posted: Jan 5 2008, 08:17 PM
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 contact me a heitz.colton @ gmail.com (No space for email!) Group: Drones Posts: 2,586 Member No.: 598 Joined: 2-February 07 |
Left a review on it. Second best story I've read there. Left the longest review I've ever written to it even.
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Great things come from great people... And horrible people also. And horrible things from great people too... Things come from other things, OK? |
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| Nessa |
Posted: Jan 5 2008, 08:34 PM
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A rabid Zuko fangirl^^ Group: Drones Posts: 2,070 Member No.: 73 Joined: 18-June 06 |
Thanks so much
 I didn't think anyone would like it T_T(I replied to your review.) |
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| Me, Myself, and I |
Posted: Jan 5 2008, 08:57 PM
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contact me a heitz.colton @ gmail.com (No space for email!) Group: Drones Posts: 2,586 Member No.: 598 Joined: 2-February 07 |
Hey, can you check out one of my stories maybe? I also left a review of your Harry Potter story at Fanfiction.net.
Where did you get your pen name there? Mine, to be honest, is my first name and then my initials at that site. This post has been edited by Me, Myself, and I on Jan 5 2008, 09:00 PM -------------------- Like Nintendo? Then join Nintendo Resort, a forum dedicated to Nintendo!
Great things come from great people... And horrible people also. And horrible things from great people too... Things come from other things, OK? |
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| Hawkfire |
Posted: Jan 5 2008, 09:33 PM
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 KITTY! -Boo(from Monsters Inc.) Group: Drones Posts: 252 Member No.: 832 Joined: 10-June 07 |
i don't have a fanfic account, AND i don't know how to manuver around there, so i will leave you a comment here.
Comment: I liked it, very much. I thought even for a short Story it was AWESOME. Well that's all I can think so buh byez! Sincerely, Hawkfire[Kita] -------------------- Cats are a mysterious kind of folk -Sir Walter Scott |
  
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| Nessa |
Posted: Jan 5 2008, 09:45 PM
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A rabid Zuko fangirl^^ Group: Drones Posts: 2,070 Member No.: 73 Joined: 18-June 06 |
Thanks Kita
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| A:TLA |
Posted: Jan 6 2008, 11:54 AM
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Member Group: Drones Posts: 11,897 Member No.: 139 Joined: 18-July 06 |
You're a good writer
 --I just never noticed until now.  Keep it up. There are a few places where it doesn't flow well, but in most places it does. -------------------- |
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| Nessa |
Posted: Jan 6 2008, 12:13 PM
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A rabid Zuko fangirl^^ Group: Drones Posts: 2,070 Member No.: 73 Joined: 18-June 06 |
Thanks A:TLA
I know what ya mean, I noticed it to when a I read it again. I'm going back and changing it when I have time. |
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