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Title: the train
Description: taking me away


sohom - August 2, 2005 06:24 PM (GMT)
Jingle-bangle you run away
On the rails shining smooth silver light
And take away my dreams
To the wonderland of no beings.

My thoughts watch the ripe grains on your side
Dancing thick with the wind flowing by.
And far away in countless space
Flakes of cloud call me high

Ringing your concert in my mind
The trees and air whoosh by
Their lively breath touching my soul
I feel lighter than ever before.

Oh mighty train, where are you taking me?
Into a world free of worldly things!
Where my senses speak soft songs with nature
And waters and air dance in rhyme.

Are there any little children there
Playing together boys and girls
Diffused in a scent of happy friendship!
Wearing a smile lifelong.

Jingle-bangle you take me there
And please have no return
From this world away from the world
In my dreams where I can live better.


euphoric_dreamz - August 3, 2005 05:57 PM (GMT)
Thoughts are nice

The_One - August 6, 2005 10:12 AM (GMT)
Good poem!
Reminds me of Humayun Kabir's poem "Trains"
Keep it up!
May the Force be with You!

gogol - August 13, 2005 02:05 PM (GMT)
too good, sohom

dialsforsayan - August 13, 2005 06:58 PM (GMT)
the theme is very nice , but i think the poetic license has been excercised a bit too frequently . anyway , another decent job , keep it up .




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