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| *WaRrIa*Fya* |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 01:47 AM
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Okay.. I'm back!! I put this up on ff.net last night and i got 5 reviews by this morning. I feel loved! Anyway I want to know what you think. it was gonna be a one-shot, but i decided to make it into a story.
Baby can I hold you tonight? ‘Why did he have to leave me, out here in the cold? I wanted to give him what ever he wanted, do what ever he wanted, and be what ever he wanted. But no… He just had to throw it all away. Why did you do it…? What made you chose her instead of me?’ [Flash back 5 years ago] Cyborg and Beast boy were drifting to the lovely computerised world of Tekken Tag 4. Raven was trying to meditate but always kept getting interrupted by the sudden cries of victory. Robin was teaching Starfire about feelings and emotions since she had just finished a novel called ‘Girls in Tears’. Raven said it would suit her personality and that she might learn and few things. She, Star, always secretly hoped that her and Robin would become a couple, which they had become, but hoped that they wouldn’t end up like Ellie and Russell. She stole a glance from Robin and he noticed, leaned forward and kissed her forehead. They stared into each other’s eyes but… <DING DONG> They both sighed in disappointment. Seeing nobody else going to answer the door, Robin decided to. Star followed his every move as they made their way to the door. Robin’s eyes widen as he gasped at who he saw. A tall, slender red head with green eyes was standing in the door way. She squealed and greeted Robin with a hug which he immediately returned. They stayed there for two minutes before Star’s patience ran thin and tapped the strange girl on the shoulder. “Um… please do not mind me asking but… who are you and why are you hugging Robin?” She said through gritted teeth. Robin and the girl both blushed and the girl replied, “I’m Babs, Robin’s girlfriend!” Star’s mouth dropped. The rest of the titans’ heads whipped round to the door on hearing these words. They all had identical messages in their heads… ‘This is NOT good!’ [Weeks later] Babs and Robin spent more and more time together and Starfire didn’t even get a look in to see how her boyfriend was doing. All she knew, (with a little help from her true friend Larissa), that Babs was troublesome BIATCH who needed to go. Cyborg and BB had taken a liking to her and let her join with their activities. She liked best of both foods and could cook properly, which appealed to them more. Raven had also opened up to her about a lot more stuff than she would tell Star. Robin spent most of his time researching for Slade and hanging out with Babs. This made Star even angrier as she shook with jealousy every time Robin went off with Babs. Too bad for her nobody in the tower helped her about it. To Star it seemed that nobody, (not even her well... if you call him a boyfriend), cared about her any more. She had tried to get Larissa into the tower but she had a serious grudge against the Boy Wonder. Robin… Star thought about all of this and decided to see if she could speak to him. She roamed around the tower and saw that his door was slightly open. She peaked inside silently and gasped inwardly at what she saw. There on Robin’s bed was two figures making out and mumbling stuff. A masked figure with jet black spiky hair was on top carefully roaming the red headed girl underneath him. She was roaming her hands through his hair and around his shoulders. “What do you think Star would say if she ever found out?” Babs asked between breaths. “She not gonna find out hopefully. We need her on the team; it would never be the same with out her!” The Boy Blunder replied. The two both resumed their activities. Silent tears ran down Star’s face as she ascended to the roof. ‘I know what needs to be done!’ She thought sadly. Please review as always! -------------------- ![]() Oh Happy Simultaneous Joy I'm The Luckiest Girl In The World... Member of the Evanescence Club!! Join the Ice2Water Evanescence Shrine, hosted by our own robstarforeva!!! Ice2Water/Evanescence |
| Ningen_Demonai |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 03:35 AM
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O.O* You... are... eeeeviiiiiillll...!!! But that was really well-written. Too much implication since it did not involve Star, but it was good. XD
-------------------- There should be more fluffy moments between Rob and Star. But I'll be happy with reading fanfics about them. ^.^*
~*~What was I thinking when I let go of you?~*~ ![]() Waaaiiiii!!!! ^.^* I love Akane and Ranma. They're so cute together!! Just like Robin and Starfire are meant to be together. ^.^* |
| iluvtt |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 05:31 AM
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GRRRRR! DO NOT MAKE ROBIN SO EVVIL!!!!
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| iluvtt |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 05:31 AM
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heh no offense! good story besides the evil robin.
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| Starchaser |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 09:10 AM
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No double posting iluvtt.
STOP THIS CRAZY MADNESS WITH THIS........BABS CHICK!!!! SHE DOESN'T DESERVE ROBIN!!!! Poor Starfire. -------------------- ![]() |
| *WaRrIa*Fya* |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 10:34 AM
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![]() Crazy for R/S Group: Members Posts: 282 Member No.: 350 Joined: 21-September 04 |
Yes no double posting!! It annoys the hell out of me!!! Anyways that's for reviewing i just need 2 more reviews and I'll update. DOUBLE POSTING DOESN'T COUNT!!!!
for the people who reviewed! -------------------- ![]() Oh Happy Simultaneous Joy I'm The Luckiest Girl In The World... Member of the Evanescence Club!! Join the Ice2Water Evanescence Shrine, hosted by our own robstarforeva!!! Ice2Water/Evanescence |
| robstarforeva |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 11:44 AM
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AHH! you're SOOO evil!! BABS. MUST. DIEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MUHHAAAHUA!!! A*HEM, SORRY! PLEASE consiter this a warning from your biggest fan, UPDATE or I'll totaly lose it!! -------------------- ![]() ![]() PM me to join the R/s kiss club! Thanks for letting us use your pretty pic ramhay! Thanks to emeraldshine for making the dollies!! I’m romantic125 & *WaRrIa*Fya*’s biggest fan! And everyone on the kiss thread, you guys rock! R~N is the best avatar maker ever! |
| Flare |
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I THE SECOND NOW UPDATE! babs....robin your an idiot!omg...........
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| owl13 |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 04:44 PM
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this is good... but robin loves star... whats he doing with this babs girl??? arggggg... please hurry up and update
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| teentitanfan |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 04:47 PM
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yea good story, but dont make Robin soooo EVIL!
-------------------- JJJ, YOU'RE THE MOST AWSOME PERSON!!!!
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| Starchaser |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 05:05 PM
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Hey, you said only two more reviews and you would continue. Including this one, that's five!! Please keep your promise and keep going.
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| Starfire4ever |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 05:16 PM
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I hate Babs!!! Poor Starfire! She and Robin belong together! But I would really like to see what happens next, so please update! Very well written. Oh and Babs is Barbera Gordon aka Batgirl, isn't she? Grrrr...
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| Flare |
Posted: Sep 24 2004, 06:36 PM
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i dont care who she is! she must go down! -------------------- |
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| iluvtt |
Posted: Sep 25 2004, 11:04 AM
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sorry, but I dont know what double posting is. I thought it was like posting the same thing twice. Its like posting 2 times in a row isnt it? sorry!
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| *WaRrIa*Fya* |
Posted: Sep 25 2004, 11:07 AM
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For people online reading this story... I'm writing it now. Give me some time!!
-------------------- ![]() Oh Happy Simultaneous Joy I'm The Luckiest Girl In The World... Member of the Evanescence Club!! Join the Ice2Water Evanescence Shrine, hosted by our own robstarforeva!!! Ice2Water/Evanescence |
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