I wanted to write three for this week, but I kept procrastinating for various reasons. I also wanted to have a run-in with the same santa claus in my second post but I ran out of time. I had a hard time keeping up with who was in my match and who was not. The card is different in about four of five places. :(

EDIT: And P.S. - kudos to Corey for providing some kickass newfie info for my first roleplay. Jigg's Dinner. :)

i enjoyed the part where you were hosted by 110mb. that was enthralling.

Nobody writes good old fashioned good guys anymore and you do a good job of it - keep it rolling. Guys like Travis are always good to feud with - you make yourself a commodity. :) My only minor beef would be about the flashbacks - sometimes it feels sort've fillery, and with this much heat going around, you didn't need it.

Flashbacks are a new thing - I never used to include them in my posts. I'll keep that in mind. Definitely not using them to waste space on the page. Thought it would be a good complement to the "point" of my post. Good argument, though.

That was Corey's idea. :(

you are still travis miller. :(

i liked that you jumped into your face persona so completely, which is something I've never been able to do. The part of your roleplays where you provide the flashbacks to the previous show (or 2 shows ago, or whatever) needs to be taken out, as it is just filler.

actually, fuck that, don't get rid of them completely. still, don't make it part of your formula. If it's an especially poignant segment, then I can see why you would want to repost, but otherwise, I'd stay away from it.

for not roleplaying for a while, you have done a good job shaking off the rust so far.

the flashbacks can be done better if it were re-written into miller's own point of view.

good point. i was going to say this, but forgot to. :(

this could actually make for some miller-tastic roleplays. pretty soon i'm going to be living in football/bowling mentality writing some pretty crazy shit. kudos to corey, once again.

EDIT: it literally is like 2004 all over again. 2010 is the new 2004.