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Teresa Quaranta - December 18, 2009 11:29 PM (GMT)
:happydance:

i like hearing people's thoughts.

Neo - December 18, 2009 11:39 PM (GMT)
u r gud fl@meb@1t.

Honestly, without you, I don't think I would have maxed out. Trashtalk across the board would have definitely suffered as well.

That said, your second and third roleplays were far superior to your first, which was sort of a mess throughout. You sort of righted the ship when you got to Tony's layout, but your material in Adora's and Muck's was a little cringe-inducing. Also, grammatically speaking, there were more errors here than in anything else of yours that I read. You might have edited it since I last checked, though, so I can't say now.

There wasn't much to pick apart in the second or third, in terms of quality. So great job on that. Overall, a very good effort.

Teresa Quaranta - December 18, 2009 11:58 PM (GMT)
yeah most of the spelling/never ending run on sentences are (sp) since it's technically not teresa writing. but yeah, overall i feel ya. :)

Corey - December 19, 2009 02:30 AM (GMT)
see: the everybody thread. :(

multiple tabbing is hard some times.

Teresa Quaranta - March 13, 2010 11:51 PM (GMT)
ok this story arc is ending or about to end or... something. what do you generally think about the stuff since december?

keep it real plz, x is boring, y makes no sense, z was cool, etc




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