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 Advice on my last RP. (Link inside!), "The Story of David Nistiero"--'Cuffed
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David_Nistiero
Posted: Jun 23 2005, 01:09 AM


BLT Sandwich


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www.geocities.com/david_nistiero/SW3.html

Please tell me what you thought of my last RP.

I'd do a poll but I'm to lazy, so deal. tongue.gif

But, yeah, any feedback is welcome, and you can rate it yourselves from 1 to 10. 1 being the worst, and so on...

Thanks,

Peace. headbanger.gif


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God's Enemy
Posted: Jun 23 2005, 01:44 AM


Normal people scare me.


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Well first off I liked your rp to a pount. then you put in a part that made no sense at all. SW is not in anyway in the same world as Batman. It made no sense. As for spelling I saw some errors and word being used for the wrong meaning.

And then in some parts your guy sounded like a face to me when he isrying to be a heel. Doesn't make to much sense to me.

your trash talk was ok but trash talk is rarely any good.

Overall your rp good of been better(not including the Batman part.) If you could of done something that made more sense in that part. you would of got a 6-7.

With it you got a 3. that's how much I disliked that part.

yes I was surprised but the surprise was a WTF is he smoking surprise. Kinda like giving a baby a condom.

You could of done way better and I know it. Your good but you shouldn't of done some of those things. Flashback was okay but it was expected when you first said your parents were fighting.

Sorry if I seemed mean but that's that.

you'l do better.
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David_Nistiero
Posted: Jun 23 2005, 01:48 AM


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Rofl.

The batman thing will get explained in the next roleplay and it'll all make sense, relax. lol.

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