Humanformers TFA Black Arachnia

Here's my Humanformer Black Arachnia. I want to make this more "roboty" so I would love some feed back on this as it is

add more joint lines, like at your elbows, knees and middle. maybe a head peice that resembles part of her head would be good. Also more spider legs. i do realise your going gothic or punk with this, a nice change.

Its a cute idea and the execution is nice for the most part. I think my main problem is with styling. The make-up and hair lok like they belong on some Mad Max costume and not a TF, if I remember BA was a bit more polished and refined. I would also suggest adding in her helmet to the mix, it would really help to establish who you are and also add to the obvious punk/rebel style you like but do it with base in canon. If you want to stick with make-up then I would suggest lining with black and then smoking it out with red for a glow effect. Also, since your face is not as dark as BA's you may want to switch to a cool toned very dark red lipstick though the black is alright, the matte was a good idea.

The white cord on your belt (I'm assuming its supposed to be web) looks out of place and weird, no other white in the costume and it looks rather like a lasso hung on your belt.

Your tailoring is great excepting in the arms so maybe set aside some time to take that in which will help to eliminate that clothing look.

To be more roboty then helmet as I said before and add in some more armor type pieces like the knee covers and point finger covers to the ends of your gloves.

Overall I'd give you a 7/10. The idea is great but the execution and specifically styling need a bit of tlc.

Alright, the critiquing period is over. Fix, you can reply now if you want. :]